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nice track not to bad atall ur drum programing is spot on but maybe abit more bass maybe just me tho 
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01-11-2003 03:22 |
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Surya 
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The Flea: Quite fast. What BPM is this? Everything sounds like its done quite hasty, but that may have to do with this high bpm. Also, its not that clear what theme you are building the track around. You just switch melodies like its the best way to keep variation in a track. It's not, when done as fast as you do it. Keep melodies in longer, and make variations within these blocks, so every part can come more too its right.
Sypher: Same snare 
About the same remarks for thisone. I hear you like putting elements extremely left or right in the stereofield. Creating a nice stereofield is more about giving sounds a stereofield by themselves or adding stereo delay or reverb.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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02-11-2003 14:41 |
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stino
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Registration Date: 13-07-2003
Posts: 308
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indeed verry fast! the flea
damn ....
too fast 
stick to 180bpm
what soft did you use for making this?
keep working
musically not so bad, but the sound needs more work!
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06-11-2003 19:59 |
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Schmidi
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Registration Date: 26-07-2007
Posts: 74
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Well, for a first track...Let's just say my first one over 16 years ago was a lot worse lol.
Good beat juggling, though I'm really not partial to dnb over 180bpm. Decent transitions and fx on your drums.
One thing I always stress is master 1-2 synths early on. It will give you a much more unique sound. As is the synths have a rather preset feel to them.
Honestly though, keep it up. For a first track you are off to a good start! Cheers, Schmidi.
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The best DnB was made 10 years ago, I'm slowly building my time machine...
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