 Razorcut - Clear Case |
Razorcut
Producer
Registration Date: 04-08-2004
Posts: 19
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Please check out my new track 'Clear Case', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
Dnb track with nice fat bass
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04-11-2006 11:57 |
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Bulls-I 
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Registration Date: 19-06-2006
Posts: 81
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Intro is kinda easy, I don't really dig the snare, I think it's a pure fruity loops sound, kicks sound prette nice, bassline sounds nice too, although it requires a bit harder/sharper/ louder snare I think, drumline needs more hats, sounds and cymbals too, melody is nice only too bad that it's the same like te bassline, but it is nice though 
Voicy thing at 2.20 comes suddenly out of nowhere but fits in anywayz, at 2.45 the bass starts annoying a little to me, to much the same and there a are no other melodies to variate, just the same one melody on and on, break at 3.45 is slammin, needed that earlier in the track , like that u can built up bigger tension to drop!
i'm gonna be honest, I didn't listen to the end, 7:45 is too long to here the same bass and drumline over and over again!
Overall good ideas and structure, but pay attention to some variation or different melody lines!
grtz Bulls-I
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04-11-2006 12:42 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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That fake out in the intro kind sucks. When you have the bobblin bassline coming through then you go back to the faster darkstep style. Sounds like 2 different songs in the intro, once the main comes in very simple very effective head nodder, but it gets old reall quick, the panning hihat is quite annoying. Not really sure what else to say. I was expecting something different once the bobble b-line came in, and you kind of disappointed a little. Needs some work, on the structure, and what not. But overall not bad, but try and stick to one style, when making a 2step tune like this, mixing 2step and darkstep are not exactly a good team, unless you really have alot of experience with it, and can pull a rabbit out of your ass so to speak.
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05-11-2006 21:20 |
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equipped
tired
Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Forshure diggin the tight drum's,..agree that the snares a bit week,..but you got it doin the trick,...actually allot of the main sound's in this are missin thickness imo,.....great edit's though,...->2:15 is sick,...thats about the only bit where that snare fit's imo,.....id maybe work on the thin soundin sound's,...takes away from your filthy edit's and the impact everything should have,...you forshure have a dam good ear for the shit,...tunes full of soulfull backbone,...enjoyed it,...cheers.
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