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camo 
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'days', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
This one is a remix of a chill out tune made by a friend of mine!
This time its the full version and 320..so enjoy!
Its a bit older...bout one or two months.....but its pretty cool i think...what do u think?
peaze
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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keepin it rollin`
www.myspace.com/camopdj
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31-10-2006 15:39 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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hey,
nice sounds and atmosphere at the intro but not to keen on them tom's. some things could be more in front like the flute. the sub-bass_slammin notes are a bit too loud. for the rest I think you shoud work more to a climax, and try and use an off beat break every 32 bar. Then I think you'de have one of the better songs in this sub-genre. I almost whent up, but realized it where just my knees cramping, fix it bro, i know you cann...
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
reggeadubwise.com
Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
muphsteppa@reggeadubwise
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31-10-2006 18:09 |
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camo
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Originally posted by muphasta
the sub-bass_slammin notes are a bit too loud.
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i ve noticed that myself but was too lazy too fix
thx for ya review!
cheers
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31-10-2006 19:00 |
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Ethereal
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Registration Date: 06-07-2006
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Was a decent tune. Liked the melody and atmosphere of it all for sure.
And I agree about the bass, its a bit to loud, its kind of killing the drums so to say.
The drums need to be a bit more 'present' sounding if you know what I mean. The kick is lacking, and needs more punch on it for sure. When the bass is playing, you want to be able to feel the kick through the bass. (Like if you were to put your fingertips on the cone of your monitors, you want to be able to feel the kick through the cone of the monitor. Thats usually a good test to see if you kick is where it needs to be. If you can get some bass on your snares that would be great too. (not to much however). )
Whole track would benefit from a boost around the 5KHz range and about the 12KHz range on the drums to give more presence.
Other than that, the synth lead might need a bit of tweaking, but is fine for the most part. Just a tad to loud. As for the backing and atmosphere, that was great. loved that part of the track for sure.
Overall pretty decent tune. Just a bit more work on it, and it'd be good to go for sure.
Ez
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"drum'n'bass eto bezdna sovershenstva" translated: "drum'n'bass is the impact of perfectness" ... "Bad Ambitions" - Subwave
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31-10-2006 21:05 |
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geeks
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Registration Date: 04-10-2006
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good tune man, nice definition on the drums, nice reese action although the pitchbending feels a little weird at times, the sub is well beautiful, overall levels and definition are good, nice tune
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05-11-2006 13:31 |
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