 D Juice - D Juice - Liquidadion |
D Juice 
Producer
Registration Date: 15-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'D Juice - Liquidadion', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
This is a track written by me a while ago, and i dont know really what to do with it cause im not really into liquid and so this is just a tryout.
maybe you like it, i hope so.
Bye!
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"Could God microwave a Burrito so hot, that he himself could not eat it? " 
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29-10-2006 14:10 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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ok playing..
eq is good... cool intro of filtered beatz..
expand on that cymbal ride setion imo.. just to keep things harder t pin down..
when things drop the bass could be louder... nice rolls here n there, would be rather boring n predictable without somthin like that..
i like the snare, 2:12 aww man thought you were gonna change it a bit but you keep runnin it, needs some variation, the next section i welcomed nice breakz. very stuttery...(if thats even a word? - lol) deff could put some other lines in here to compliment that b-line.. its jus those three notes, need to expand on that it'll add loads of ift to the tune and in itself kinda create another section.
all in all a mellow track, cant suggest much to do to it as its not really my style, just make the bass louder and dont let it become to repetative..
nice one bro
cheers
Glim
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29-10-2006 16:49 |
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wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental
Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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ok, listening...
nice intro, you picked some really nice sounds and notes, everything fits in its place, then the beat drops, nice filtering btw. Then its becoming to sound too commercial, but what the hell, I like. I agree with Glim, the bass is not loud enough and the beat is overlayering it. The track is getting boring with each minute cos´ there are almost no changes in it. You only work with the same instruments and thats making the tune too repetitive.
summary: nice melodies, chilled out, but needs some refreshing elements.
cheers, good work
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29-10-2006 21:49 |
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equipped
tired
Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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wow man,..level's n all soundin tight,..beuty synth work,...some pad's in the back would fit nice,...maybe add some efffect's on the vocal at part's,...nice drum work,...gotta say again mix sounds great,..shit load of work gone into this,.all flow's real nice,....forget bout my idea of effect's on that vocal,...it's hardly in the track that its fine as is id say,....anyway id maybe shorten thing's a bit,....make it more of a package,..enjoyed it,...cheers.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by equipped: 31-10-2006 08:12.
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31-10-2006 08:12 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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NIce intro, very professionally written could be some movie music
Like how the drums are comin
Sounds nice very special
From here its getting to repetetive
Maybe some more bass, but can do with this bass.
Nice job I give you 8
Good equalizing
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31-10-2006 10:27 |
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