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wrm
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Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Wonderland', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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28-10-2006 14:06 |
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Glim 
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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a tamed intro... trancey feel..
urgh, not keen on the drums.. too weak, too clean, too many ghost hits in the wrong places, (FOR MY TASTE), i like that conga sound shaking in the backround if it is a conga, its something like that anywayz.. 
the drop is understated and there's lots of elements in the drums that make the tune weak, i cant stand hearing ghost hits in random places, i'm very closed-minded and old skool like that im afraid.. 
got no problem with the bass notes, they do sound a bit presety, but the jump-up feel to the bassline is pleasing to my ears. 
lose the digital stabs with delay over the beats n bass imo.. 
eq is nice but overall its a bit too basic
and i dont like the snare used in the opening break
3:38 - the first time my ears have pricked up lisyening to this, now we're talking, love that bass sound, wicked, the track is starting to sound more complete.
wow you've introduced this elemt way too late imo.. expand on this and bring it in earlier..
stray away from sounding too digital and presety mate 
hope this helps
keep rinsin 
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28-10-2006 20:17 |
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Thanks Glim, let me work on your tips...will do some changes, like with that bass in 3:38, i will put it in earlier....
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28-10-2006 20:46 |
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