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Diasporah Diasporah is a male
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Registration Date: 04-08-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Primary', post your comments here and vote for it!!!

A remix i did for a friend for his upcoming mp3 label...

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11-10-2006 11:57 Homepage of Diasporah
sparky sparky is a male
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Hi

Overall this is a good effort.

The mix is clear and well produced.

One thing I'd definitely look into though is varying the kick and snare a bit by changing the rhythm and altering the snares timbre every now and again.

If you've layered the snare then maybe remove a a couple of layers on less important beats. The strong downbeats will then stand out more. Also try varying the velocity.

Apart from that nice work Smile

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12-10-2006 21:36
Airfull Airfull is a female
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for me it sounds a bit boring
that slowmotion effect in the beginning felt like your track doesn't come up. at a certain momen I thougt it was the end of something, while we were in the beginning.
there where you use the vocals, that could have been a good part but that slowmotion thing is back wich makes it sound boring again. you're loosing that magic touch of a vocal.

the rest is not bad but it isn't a partytrack for me.
as they say in the ratings. i'ld go for a drink.

at4min it feels like getting better and harder...but still dissapoints me a bit.
some varying wouldn't be bad idd.

sorry.
6.25

greetz Airfull

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13-10-2006 11:07
Nick ZZ Nick ZZ is a male
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Drumz can use a layer and compression
Like the vocal, maybe a little less on the Delay
Like the synth, but it can use some EQ
The bass is good.
It's not a bad track, might take a few edits after gathering all the feedback. Passout

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13-10-2006 16:01 Homepage of Nick ZZ
Diasporah Diasporah is a male
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Word thanx....

I will take the feedback in consideration and most likely implement them Smile

I made the track with the concept of it being nostalgic
Didnt take me long to compile the original was very hard to remix and was a task so I wanted to be almost a diffrent vibe from it.

Believe it or not ...it rocs the shit out of a dancefloor

and it needs to be sped up lil...Its at like 167

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13-10-2006 19:44 Homepage of Diasporah
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