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04-10-2006 22:00 |
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PassDa J.
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Wow, some freaky sounds inthere dude ... Nice atmo ...
The drumz are so chill man nice ... First drop ... nice sub but I can't clearly hear if they sound right (headphones) ...
Nice stuff with the voicechopping ... freaky shit but don't overdo it cause it could get annoying ...
Good tune, you"re improving, that's the most important, you're producin' like a psycho, one track each day
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04-10-2006 22:14 |
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Paki
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Try to aviod the delay on the on the drums in the first drop....
More variation is needed in the first breakdown...
Interesting subbass u got there....
Add some more fx in this tune... there is only 1-2 synth playing... and nothing more...
Add some noises... pad needed....
What the hell is this now u had much better tunes till now( more creative and inovative)...
Looks like u have put some accent on the sound quality...
Well it is ok...
The drums... r more variable than ur previous tracks....
U`ve done the filtering I can see...
No outro? hmmm that can be interesting....
U`ve tried to avoid the long intros....
The arrpegio in the background makes me nervous but that`s my opinion....
It apears that u have improved much in the drum layering interesting hats and cymbals....
U have learn the counting in producing that is very good...
U are rapidly improving I must say....
In future try to program the drum patterns without delay... u have much better control over the break IMO...
Overall good tune but u can better I know u can
Rate this 8/10 just because of the effort and for the progres in creating sound quality...
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04-10-2006 22:20 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Thanks for the comments. And yeah paki i have been focusing on more structure and sound quality and drops and such. Then on the overall innovative style that I have or had
With the stuff i have learned I am going back one by one and redoing my first 10 or so tracks, that I think are really good an have awesome ideas. And i am redoing the layouts and mixdown of those. So you will be seeing more good stuff from me hopefully. I am just going through the motions of learning everything there is to know, then focusing on every aspect of a tune. Thanks Paki and Pass Da for the positive comments
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04-10-2006 22:27 |
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Paki
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Originally posted by iKoN
Thanks for the comments. And yeah paki i have been focusing on more structure and sound quality and drops and such. Then on the overall innovative style that I have or had
With the stuff i have learned I am going back one by one and redoing my first 10 or so tracks, that I think are really good an have awesome ideas. And i am redoing the layouts and mixdown of those. So you will be seeing more good stuff from me hopefully. I am just going through the motions of learning everything there is to know, then focusing on every aspect of a tune. Thanks Paki and Pass Da for the positive comments |
The tune is Ok it is groovey but it is "poor" in sounds
U need more pads, synth, and different type of noises to make it more "rich" and "colorfull"
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04-10-2006 22:30 |
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Philthy McNasty
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well if you listen on headphones you hear all kinds of lil sounds that i threw in there. But once on regular speakers the sounds get drowned out by everything and if i turn them up any higher they sound shitty. That is what i am currently trying to improve is combining things that flow and stand out rather than get drowned out or just dont sound right
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04-10-2006 22:35 |
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Paki
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Originally posted by iKoN
well if you listen on headphones you hear all kinds of lil sounds that i threw in there. But once on regular speakers the sounds get drowned out by everything and if i turn them up any higher they sound shitty. That is what i am currently trying to improve is combining things that flow and stand out rather than get drowned out or just dont sound right |
I`ve listened it twice, on speakers and on headphones( I voted this tune).
There r no different sounds, they r much-less all the same...
I would advise when u create ur tunes, all the sounds that u r putting in,to be putted dry. Even after u create the whole track(the entire sequence) do the mixing and applying any effects if needed
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04-10-2006 22:43 |
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another ikon tune
seems like to forgot to add a bassline. at 2:30 that sliding bass doesnt do it for me and its drowned by all other sounds
feels like it hasnt dropped all the way through, not digging those transitions
absolutely huge kick, dont like how its delayed tho. other drums are truly lowfi
all the time there is that noisy muffle. not likin that, feels swarmed in reverbs
everything is very flat mixdown wise, there is no excitement. the sniping effect on that vocal is nice
this is more like a soundscape than a track. but not feeling any of it
try to dedicate yourself more to one creation.
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04-10-2006 23:58 |
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Its hard for me to work on one tune
. I have so many ideas, that I have to put down or I lose it. So not all my time is ever concentrated on one tune.
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05-10-2006 00:21 |
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Dam nice effect's n edit's on your break's,...sound real tight,..i agree that this could do with more effect's, sound's ect,..it would only add to it imo,..you got a dam good layout for some nutty bass for example,..anyway this is a heavy soundin so far,...would work on it a bit more though,...enjoyed it,..cheers Ikon.
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05-10-2006 05:56 |
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This is pretty nasty stuff...but as most people all ready have mentioned, it sounds muddy like hell.
Try to use some side chaining on ur subbass and breaks, colour ur breaks with a nice sonic maximiser etc.
That will bring out all the goodness of ur beats for sure.
Cheers,
SAR!n
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05-10-2006 12:57 |
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Paki
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Originally posted by SARIN
Try to use some side chaining
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It could hepl... but I still think u should make the mixing "dry" without effect and any master tools and even then to aplly the master effects
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05-10-2006 13:11 |
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SARIN
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Yeah forgot to mention that he will have to use his samples "dry" or clean as possible.
The side chaining is more to let the beats come forward.
Cheers,
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05-10-2006 16:02 |
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Paki
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Originally posted by SARIN
Yeah forgot to mention that he will have to use his samples "dry" or clean as possible.
The side chaining is more to let the beats come forward.
Cheers,
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Agreed...
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05-10-2006 16:09 |
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SARIN
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Yeah so iKon...try to get the samples as clean as possible and you will get the quality this tune needs.
Have a listen to my tune and that will give you an idea what side chaining can do for your break aswell.
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05-10-2006 16:47 |
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gon review soon
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05-10-2006 17:03 |
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Paki
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Originally posted by SARIN
Yeah so iKon...try to get the samples as clean as possible and you will get the quality this tune needs.
Have a listen to my tune and that will give you an idea what side chaining can do for your break aswell.
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I cant find ur tune anywhere
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05-10-2006 17:33 |
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It's everything said that you need to know. Only try technically to avoid the Hi freqs by attenuating them carefully. Add bass fill in the track, there need to be power in such thing no matter it is slow or fast. Boost it carefully. Improvement is on the way. Continue with the work i think you have ambitions
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06-10-2006 00:22 |
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Yeah no probs...
All you need to do is get 2 group channels, on one channel you put all ur beats and on the other your subbass.
Now put on both channels a dB-D dynamics processor. Set your group channel with the beats on send A and set the Group Channel with your subbass on Receive A.
What this does is everytime your basskick kicks, it pushes the subbass gently away and there fore you will hear the beats come to the front alot more.
You will have to play with the settings alot...can't give away all the tricks!!
But remember your beats need a short attack.
I hope that helped...now go and have a listen to my tune and vote for it!
Cheers,
SAR!n
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06-10-2006 03:30 |
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