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Paki Paki is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Rustless', post your comments here and vote for it!!!

Ok so I`ve created this short urban style tune.... with some dark elements in it... cant actualy define the genre so i caled it dark-tech-hard step... or something...


This track has been deleted. Reason: Paki has been banned from the site for creating a second identity and trying to cheat the voting system
04-10-2006 00:37
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track's heavy dutty,...diggin all the effect's on your break's,..rippin,...vocal->"ha" sound's tight,....track sound's dam good,....cheers.

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04-10-2006 06:15
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diggin the back noises too,..nicely done,..cheers.

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04-10-2006 06:19
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Definetly a cool track. Diggin the Firefight action. Sound Quality is nice, everything flows pretty good. The only thing I didnt like. Was on the final drop I thought you were gonna go nutz with some edits, but you just repeated the breaks, with small tempo changes, and some FX. Other than that I liked it alot.....#9/10

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heavy sounding reece, IMO, don't start with full power as it looses the bite later on, try starting filtering in

omg firefights not again. ok it is an effort to introduce them orginally. but comeon, there are loads of other breaks too

not a bad track but nothing that hasn't been done..

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04-10-2006 08:01 Homepage of cynik
Paki Paki is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by iKoN
The only thing I didnt like. Was on the final drop I thought you were gonna go nutz with some edits, but you just repeated the breaks, with small tempo changes, and some FX. Other than that I liked it alot.....#9/10


I agree it needs more invention Evil
04-10-2006 12:39
Paki Paki is a male
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Originally posted by cynik


not a bad track but nothing that hasn't been done..


Damn right Crying
04-10-2006 12:40
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the arrangment n stuff is good.
like the dark amto sounds and fx.
i rekon the reece needs to be more disturbing... the drums are sounding cool... think just need to layer more sounds over... or turn the ones u have up a bit.
soundin cool though

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04-10-2006 12:55 Homepage of anf0 D
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hmmm... special, rythmics mixed with some sort of percussion elements. Trully, i love that sound. Keep working on such rythmics. Bigup But you need to understand that sometimes making long sequences are becoming boring, so don't repeat them too many times. Everything else is...DEATH! Drummer

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04-10-2006 15:14
Paki Paki is a male
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But you need to understand that sometimes making long sequences are becoming boring, so don't repeat them too many times.


Long Huh I guess u think on the second drop Huh
04-10-2006 23:00
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exactly...

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06-10-2006 17:30
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quote:
Originally posted by Paki
Please check out my new track 'Rustless', post your comments here and vote for it!!!


Ok so I`ve created this short urban style tune.... with some dark elements in it... cant actualy define the genre so i caled it dark-tech-hard step... or something...


ok intro is cool...

i guess all everyone onthis site listens to is like... death dnb which is apparently why all of yo have the ears you do cause most of it sounds liek shit anywya...

drums are ok but the kick is hardly in the mix... and the filtration is cool. but a bit un necissary...doesnt add nor take awhile imo..

melodies... "chromatic scale" wahtever the fuck you guys are talking about in a billion other posts... the melodies fine but liek in all death/tech step dnb its minimal and hardly anyuthing to really fallow.l..



something that i want to pointout is that everything that im hearing here has been done before... if you guys are keen on new ideas you might want to start spitting those out too...

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06-10-2006 19:24
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quote:
Originally posted by Surora23
quote:
Originally posted by Paki
Please check out my new track 'Rustless', post your comments here and vote for it!!!


Ok so I`ve created this short urban style tune.... with some dark elements in it... cant actualy define the genre so i caled it dark-tech-hard step... or something...




drums are ok but the kick is hardly in the mix... and the filtration is cool. but a bit un necissary...doesnt add nor take awhile imo..

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Agreed ...
06-10-2006 19:37
Paki Paki is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by Surora23
quote:
Originally posted by Paki
Please check out my new track 'Rustless', post your comments here and vote for it!!!


Ok so I`ve created this short urban style tune.... with some dark elements in it... cant actualy define the genre so i caled it dark-tech-hard step... or something...






something that i want to pointout is that everything that im hearing here has been done before... if you guys are keen on new ideas you might want to start spitting those out too...


Damn right something has to be done about that Huh
06-10-2006 19:38
Paki Paki is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by Surora23
quote:
Originally posted by Paki
Please check out my new track 'Rustless', post your comments here and vote for it!!!


Ok so I`ve created this short urban style tune.... with some dark elements in it... cant actualy define the genre so i caled it dark-tech-hard step... or something...


ok intro is cool...

i guess all everyone onthis site listens to is like... death dnb which is apparently why all of yo have the ears you do cause most of it sounds liek shit anywya...

drums are ok but the kick is hardly in the mix... and the filtration is cool. but a bit un necissary...doesnt add nor take awhile imo..

melodies... "chromatic scale" wahtever the fuck you guys are talking about in a billion other posts... the melodies fine but liek in all death/tech step dnb its minimal and hardly anyuthing to really fallow.l..



something that i want to pointout is that everything that im hearing here has been done before... if you guys are keen on new ideas you might want to start spitting those out too...


Now wasn`t this a harsh review Big Grin Thanks about being that honest... although I take it as act of anger Wink But thanks anyway
06-10-2006 19:40
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i havent eve listened to this track.. and im probably not going to from the reviews but if you dont want criticism dont post... simple

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06-10-2006 21:09 Homepage of Arkitekt
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the kick needs to cut through the mix more. suggest you layer it more as the tramens on their own hardly do the track justice

I got tired of the same sound of that lead/bass over and over, needs to evolve more. or completely change with some kind of switch accompanied by the drums later on

the main theme isn't very prominent, try to accent the varying parts of the tune with fx and whatnot
09-10-2006 01:40
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too bad the track is gone.

anyway:

less = more Smile
10-10-2006 15:06
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That is too bad Paki...

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