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Please check out my new track 'Narodni Prikaski', post your comments here and vote for it!!!

I made this tune like a half year before, but because of the server problems, I never uploaded it till now. I did everything in it, synthesized the bass and used the tramen loop along with a pile of other drum samples to create the drum loops.

I also used the 3xosc fruity synth to create the background (and the arpeggio sounds), used fruity slayer for the second guitar and a sample for the first one.

did the mastering and eq myself (back then).

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03-10-2006 15:25 Homepage of Muad'Dib
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The first synth and the piano in the intro sound off tone (after 10" and again after 50")

The intro is really soft and melodic... boy what a contrast when hell breaks loose Big Grin . You make a mix of 2 styles which might not be mixable very well?
People who like the intro will probably find the tune too hard. People who like hard stuff probably won't dig the intro.

The FL Slayer guitar is well done and fits in greatly. Good break action, tunes is at it's best around 5:10.

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03-10-2006 16:33 Homepage of BattleDrone
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okay, before the critique...i like the epic feel this track has about it. however, i would like to hear the drums build before the drop. the intro is cool and minimal but from a dj's stance, it would be hard to mix. all the sounds sit well together. i was craving a clean part to this tune. maybe a vocal somewhere?...i listened twice! could use more of a sonic build up in places. decent tune...needs the polished edges to really shine.

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03-10-2006 18:49 Homepage of short-wave
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Yeah the intro piano is way off, but I think thats what you were going for, it sounded kind of like the style of mickey finns 2nd remix of lighter, when he changed the tempo and chpped and looped it around. I dunno I liked it but definetly throws you off. Then you come in with the steppy break not really diggin it. Now on to the main break, that is such a blatant use of an amen. No lead up or anything, I am digging the over sound of the tune once the amen comes in but it just doesnt really have in leadin so it sounds like you just said "fuck it let me throw an amen in there" try to build up to the amen. The drum edits are very basic but real crisp i can always go for a rollin crisp amen Big Grin not bad, but definetly needs alot of work on the transtions. But sound quality is awesome #7/10.

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03-10-2006 19:24 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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Good piano play in the intro...
Proper use of synths here Tongue
the brakdown is coming sudenlly... it is somehow "made by force"
The A-men is too technikal it doesn`t has any decent "story" it sound like u`ve `just chopped it without thinking Frown

But I like the decend sound quality and good mastering effort Wink

And teh ethnic theme used in the track Wink
03-10-2006 19:59
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right here we go........

that piano is not good IMO

the beat in intro isnt' great either, kick sounds like a happy hard core kick
if fact the whole intro is sounding a bit happy hardcore.
the main drums sound like a tramen with a kick and new snare.
are we still in teh late 90's? Roll Eyes
oh man that breakdown is pure cheese on toast
that kick is way too loud.

i like the idea in trying to mix two very different er vibes put it just hasnt been pulled off that well

sorry if i seam harsh but in the words of munki c

" i dont believe in vlowing smoke up peoples arses"

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04-10-2006 00:27 Homepage of D2o
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sorry if i seam harsh but in the words of munki c

" i dont believe in vlowing smoke up peoples arses"


did i say that? u been hunting through my posts then? dont believe everything you read on the internet. lmao. i must have been drunk.

anyway. that vasquez bloke is good. go and check him out. Drummer

as for muaddib. im not feeling it man.
some of it sounds a bit toy like. theres some nice sounds in places on this. but the intro piano or whatever it is just grates a little bit. in terms of dj'ing it wouldnt work. im with jimmy c on this im afraid. sorry
04-10-2006 05:45
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right then Muad'Dib,...finally some tunage from you,....even if it is an oldie Big Grin ,....i remember hearin this not to long ago,...everything work's real good at the drop,...the more synthesised part's are a bit to soft in contrast,..maybe work the theme more round the harder bit,...enjoyin all the work that's gone into this,...great track to listen too,...enjoyed it,...cheers. Drummer

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what was that second plug at the end?,....nice plugs btw. Big Grin

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quote:
Originally posted by MUNKI C

did i say that? u been hunting through my posts then? dont believe everything you read on the internet. lmao. i must have been drunk.
wouldnt work. im with jimmy c on this im afraid. sorry


i haven't been hunting your posts, just remembered the quote Big Grin

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04-10-2006 09:30 Homepage of D2o
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Well,well, well... people not liking my tune... who gives you the right huh? I hate you all... I hate you...

Big Grin


Thanx for the replies, I really appreciate them Pleased I have no problems with the truth, so don't be sorry Munki Big Grin

Equipped, I don't know on what synth you think off, might be the 3xosc.

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04-10-2006 11:11 Homepage of Muad'Dib
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quote:
Originally posted by Muad'Dib

Thanx for the replies, I really appreciate them Pleased I have no problems with the truth



thats good to hear, annoys me when people ask for reviews then get upset when people tell it like it is

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04-10-2006 12:05 Homepage of D2o
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hehe i think the synths are funny... not my cuppa tea.
the drums sound alright though.
drop is heavy... the reece/bassline thing is heavy. those synths just dont fit me thinks, they put me off.
the arrangment is pretty good, and the overall sound of things isnt too bad.

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04-10-2006 13:03 Homepage of anf0 D
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quote:
Originally posted by Muad'Dib
Well,well, well... people not liking my tune... who gives you the right huh? I hate you all... I hate you...

Big Grin




You are right .. it`s shit Big Grin Big Grin
Just kidding anyway
04-10-2006 18:22
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hey man,

i must say i don't like the melody in the intro, what i do like is how you use that melody in your bass for the drop, the sound you're using for the high melody sounds kinda fruity loops, maybe some more effects on it could make sound a bit better, there is something weird about this song: the melody is like chill and happy and then your bass and drums are more aggressive and punching, good producing anywayz!

grtz Bulls-I

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04-10-2006 20:00
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