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Nouveau_Riche 
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Registration Date: 26-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Orbit', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
Made in Reason 3.0
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03-10-2006 11:59 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Drumlines should roll more fluently, add some ghosts maybe.
Not feeling the main synth, this synth and the co-lead wobbly arpeggio (introduced at 1:53) don't match (off tone). Add some more bass stabs, the tune doesn't have clear bass elements. Nice atmosphere around 0:40 Vocal is great.
You need to build more tension, after the second drop some elements should be added to make it a steaming roller IMO.
With some rework this is a good track.
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03-10-2006 13:22 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
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First of those drum edits sound weird, and then the cowbell makes it even weirder sounding. I dig the mellow vibe once the pad comes in. but then you start adding the dark snippets, and it just throws the tune of again. Once the main break starts I like the ideas, but the bass and synths call for a way uglier and nasty break. i would rethink the drop. All in all not bad, but not very good either. Ill give you a 6/10 just for the mastering and mixdown
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03-10-2006 20:17 |
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Paki
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Hmmm maybe to work a little bit moer on the build up in the intro u will "mask" the drum confusion u made in the first drop IMO.
More bass in this tune is needed the stabs are somehow "slow" and "soulless".
Interesting FX u use there...
The synth are nicely tuned but u need to calculate the beats and the bars where u play them....
The second drop needs to be rearanged....
Not much is hapenning....
But interesting idea I rate this 6.5/10
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04-10-2006 13:39 |
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equipped
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Intro drum's sound real dry,..maybe layer the odd shaker to smooth thing's out a bit,..background pad's could do with a boost,...real nice chord's n sound's btw,...maybe edit that break in with your drum's more,...give em more rollin action,...some real nice ideas in this,...lovin the deep dark chord's,...cheers.
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04-10-2006 21:52 |
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Nouveau_Riche
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Thx for the replies everyone 
They're really helpful.
Can anyone tell me what a ghost drum is exactly?
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04-10-2006 21:59 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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i go down to the velocity part of the piano roll and i use the pencil tool to make random changes to each note's velocity. as simple as this may be, it makes a world of difference when you listen to the drums.
use use ghost snares. they in a slower song, they should be very subtle with low volume. a ghost snare or a ghost "flam" every now and then will make a drum sequence sound more human
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04-10-2006 23:46 |
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