drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » OgO - mANHUNT OgO - mANHUNT Author Post OgO Cool Tourist Registration Date: 04-11-2005 Posts: 37 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'mANHUNT', post your comments here and vote for it!!! This is my very first tune so please... be very very onest with the reviews This track has been deleted. Reason: Ogo tried to abuse the site by changing his email address to a fake one. His producer rights have been revoked and his tracks have been deleted. __ OgO has been banned from the site. Read this thread for the reasons. 03-10-2006 02:46 Philthy McNasty Florida DnB Masta! Registration Date: 23-07-2006 Posts: 1,088 Helpfulness rating:  Sound Quality is OK, intro is way to long imo, its also a lil too distorted. might be my speakers though. I dont really dig this tune to much. Its kind of has no journey, its just nasty beats and bass and a trippy voice until 3:11. But after that it is madness NuSkool Jungle I love it. You have a lil to much fx on the break though it drowns it out. No to bad, but. ill give you a 8/10 just for the ending RespekT! iKoN __ http://www.myspace.com/philthydubbish 03-10-2006 02:57 Paki Cool Steppa Registration Date: 03-04-2005 Posts: 248 Helpfulness rating:  Yeahhh my kind of gye I knew it right from the title that this is EVIL Creapy vocal DEVIL talking(reminds me on the game Painkiller) in the intro... Build up is perfect.... Exelent first drop... Try to lower the bassline it is too much loud... F*cking awesome strings u got there man... in the breakdown I mean... Exelent stereo separation.... nice equing... proper use of compression.... Bassline played proper... drums dynamic.... Tech aspekt .... only try to lower the bassline... the drums are somehow in the back.... try to put them more in front.... Overall rating to this tune is 9 of 10 just beacuse that bassline(WAY TOO LOUD) 03-10-2006 03:10 OgO Cool Tourist Registration Date: 04-11-2005 Posts: 37 Helpfulness rating:  well...well... so i am welcomed to the light side of the darkest element... I thank you for the posts, these might be helpfull as i see that there is a problem with the intro when is to be mentioned...too long yes... and... i will find some solution for the bass. I will lower the freqs below 60Hz for the Grogler be somehow behind the mids. __ OgO has been banned from the site. Read this thread for the reasons. 03-10-2006 03:31 hardplnsdrftr Streetcleaner Registration Date: 07-03-2006 Posts: 271 Helpfulness rating:  Intro is great. Nice. Dark. Sets the mood well. Beats start.. pretty cool, but nothing special. The track is building tension well at this point. The mix sounds really muddy. When the amens start it's kind of all over the place, and your bass is overpowering everything. You have some cool elements, but you need to first get everything to sit in the mix. Cool start. Work on it. __ "Trouble is the common denominator of living. It is the great equalizer." Søren Kierkegaard http://www.myspace.com/hardplainsdrifter 03-10-2006 03:52 PassDa J. Sliced Slasher Registration Date: 16-05-2005 Posts: 481 Helpfulness rating:  Evereyting before 3min10 ... Don't like it But what becomes after is fucking sweet dude! Nice chaos stylé, keep producin' that way dude ... with more distortion! __ 03-10-2006 17:53 OgO Cool Tourist Registration Date: 04-11-2005 Posts: 37 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by PassDa J. Evereyting before 3min10 ... Don't like it Yeah i know what means boring stuff, but i simply cannot ignore it, so i will start asking myself where is the f**** problem when i produce long intros? he __ OgO has been banned from the site. Read this thread for the reasons. 03-10-2006 18:42 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  The intro should last max 1 minute, not 3 please. A lot of instruments were sampled too loud and then lowered in volume causing them to cut off massively. One of the breaks in the action part sounds like it was a very low bitrate mp3. If this effect is intended, then please make it less extreme, the break loses power from it. Add more variation (eg spooky sounds, stabs, fx,...) in the intro. Make more variations to the drums in the main part, sounds basically as if you are constantly switching between 2 drumlines. A lot of remarks, but that doesn't mean that your first tune is all that bad. Just keep going and improve along the way. __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 03-10-2006 18:56 cjstyles Wicked Producer Registration Date: 06-07-2005 Posts: 376 Helpfulness rating:  Aving a listen ... okay, if this is ur first track it is certainly better than my first efforts which were quite frankly poop. Liked the mad amens and the phat bassline A very good start for ur first track However have some major constructive criticism to help you improve. A lot of ur individual tracks are overdriving/ muddy. Also when cutting up amens and any other breakz it is always important to make sure the cutting is seamless and not too choppy. Nothing wrong with long intros by the way, i know some dnb tracks that have 2 min ones - the problem is with ones that dont build up. Useful tricks to build up is to bring in differnt elements every 16/32 bars such as more Fx, hats, filtered drumline. Hope thats some useful comments __ NexGen / Plush / Liquid Brilliants / LDNBmusic / Ambra Paul SG - Hidden Smile (CJ Styles Remix) forthcoming Ambra 03-10-2006 19:16 Philthy McNasty Florida DnB Masta! Registration Date: 23-07-2006 Posts: 1,088 Helpfulness rating:  I must say this is a 2day afterthought. But I have been playing your tune of on and for the past 2 days, which says alot cause i tend to get sick of tunes quick. I really dig it after 3:00. I think if you worked on this tune, it would be a slammer. Just thought you should know I have been listening to this track for the past couple of days RespeKt __ http://www.myspace.com/philthydubbish 03-10-2006 19:27 Paki Cool Steppa Registration Date: 03-04-2005 Posts: 248 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by BattleDrone The intro should last max 1 minute, not 3 please. Where does it says that intro has to be max 1 minute I completelly agree with cjstyles that build up si most important in intros not the timing 03-10-2006 19:33 OgO Cool Tourist Registration Date: 04-11-2005 Posts: 37 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by cjstyles However have some major constructive criticism to help you improve. A lot of ur individual tracks are overdriving/ muddy. Also when cutting up amens and any other breakz it is always important to make sure the cutting is seamless and not too choppy. Nothing wrong with long intros by the way, i know some dnb tracks that have 2 min ones - the problem is with ones that dont build up. Useful tricks to build up is to bring in differnt elements every 16/32 bars such as more Fx, hats, filtered drumline. yes...yes... certainly i recieve any aspect of help you may give, and i hope this should be very helpfull. Thanks cjstyles __ OgO has been banned from the site. Read this thread for the reasons. 03-10-2006 21:32 Arkitekt Brain Fried Amen Bastard Registration Date: 13-06-2005 Posts: 1,028 Helpfulness rating:  wow.. this track is really weak.. the drums sound very thin,... very thin and then they sound over distroted... again.. this needs ALOT ALOT ALOT ALOT OF WORK! __ VIRB DARKLAND144 DARKLAND115 07-10-2006 00:45 Greyone Master Producer Registration Date: 01-04-2005 Posts: 6,285 Helpfulness rating:  the less producers the better 10-10-2006 15:05 Arkitekt Brain Fried Amen Bastard Registration Date: 13-06-2005 Posts: 1,028 Helpfulness rating:  another one tries anf fails.. dumbass! __ VIRB DARKLAND144 DARKLAND115 10-10-2006 21:10 Greyone Master Producer Registration Date: 01-04-2005 Posts: 6,285 Helpfulness rating:  was that mentioned to me ? i meant the less 'cheat' producers the better by the way... 10-10-2006 22:17 Airfull Sexy Lady Registration Date: 09-11-2002 Posts: 2,455 Helpfulness rating:  auwch! __ ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD! 13-10-2006 11:40 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » OgO - mANHUNT