 My First attempt at a D+B track |
Dodgsta
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Why is no one commenting? If its that bad then tell me.
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02-10-2006 14:10 |
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BattleDrone 
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Originally posted by Dodgsta
Why is no one commenting? If its that bad then tell me. |
- Please be patient most people are at work/school during CET daytiime, we don't do this for a living.
- One should register as a user, comment other people's tracks and after several comments you can apply for producer rights.
- Then you can upload you tracks on here and get comments.
Basically it's give an take just like real life 
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02-10-2006 14:22 |
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Dodgsta
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| Please be patient most people are at work/school during CET daytiime, we don't do this for a living. |
Sorry. Im new to this site 
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02-10-2006 14:27 |
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Rudeone
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maybe you should review others first?
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02-10-2006 14:29 |
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Rudeone
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shit mate, you upped an 18mb .wav file. could you encode it to an 192 kbps mp3 file first?
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02-10-2006 14:54 |
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Dodgsta
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02-10-2006 15:38 |
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Rudeone
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only headphones here
beat sounds solid/punchy. pads are a bit dry, might need some layering/modulation. build up is pretty slow. hm it doesnt progress any further. that mid synth doesnt sound too good. id recon some more speed/drive to the whole thing. another drums layer, some percussion/shakers.
not bad, not bad
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02-10-2006 15:52 |
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Dodgsta
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Thanks for the comments.It helps to here other peoples opinons.
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02-10-2006 16:01 |
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BattleDrone
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I second Rudeone, also your break percussion could use some variation, it sounds like you just play a sample all the time.
Track coumd use an intro.
Bass is a bit too loud imo, it looks like it is clipping. (on headphones too)
Not bad for a first try.
No check out some tunes from other people and tell them where to change/improve please. Only that way we can keep it up here.
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02-10-2006 19:22 |
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PassDa J.
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Good stuff inthere ... drumz, bongos, ...
BUT GODDAMN MAN! CHANGE SOME THINGS INTHERE!
It's like you looped the same pattern 40 times man ... you need more variation ... I can hear you're a good producer, use your skills and time to make a track, don't just throw something together in 1h en think you got a tune ...
Keep on goin' dude
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