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Philthy McNasty 
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Please check out my new track 'Discombobulated', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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02-10-2006 04:10 |
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equipped
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Dam thats a sick drop man,..some real good ideas all over this,..synth's are soundin filthy,..seem's it distortes a bit when it all drop's,..anyway sick track ,...cheers.
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02-10-2006 09:03 |
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Rudeone
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nice ideas but the mix is very muddy. drumloop gets boring pretty fast. some work on the synth, some fx and a clear mix would make this a nice tune
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02-10-2006 13:14 |
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Paki
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I agree with every1 about the mix ...
Exelent ideas but more dynamics is needed espetialy on drums and bassline...
Try to define the scale and key of the synths...
Good idea but very bad performance...
But i like the idea...
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02-10-2006 16:26 |
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tryptech
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I dont get it on the mixdown, theres nothing wrong with the mixdown, do you have chitty speakers orso
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02-10-2006 19:26 |
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Surora23
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some interesting ideas...
but mixdowns are a bit more important than ideas...
jdude...the mix is totally muddy... drums lofi, and being completly drowned out by the bass...
i cant really comment much cause i really dont liek the track (taste)
although i do like the way you have your amens looping... interesting enough...
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02-10-2006 23:33 |
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Paki
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Originally posted by Paki
I agree with every1 about the mix ...
Exelent ideas but more dynamics is needed espetialy on drums and bassline...
Try to define the scale and key of the synths...
Good idea but very bad performance...
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OK well am I atleast getting the idea of structure and focus down. And is my compostition atleast getting somewhat better. Composition meaning do the synths flow with other synths and do they go with the bassline
Edited: I went back to listen to what some of you were talking about. And all it was were the formant filters volume is up to high in certain parts. Is that the only problem is the high pitch distortion that would come in on the drops? |
Synth are goimg well, I was talking about the drums and the bassline 
Bassline in drum`n`bass are played on chromatic scale 
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02-10-2006 23:50 |
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OgO
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technically the track is 5 out of 10. Why?
Technical aspect: if you like more dynamics in your track i sense the drops(which are very important) are a bit confusing.
The compression(as i sense that you have applied) is harsher then i expected in the first couple of seconds of the tune. By harsher i mean (if) you have applied a compression, it seems that the ratio is too much applied together with the attack latency. Lower the latency of the attack and put the ratio between 3:1 and 4:1.
Play a bit more with the EQ(not for mastering but for creativity). 
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03-10-2006 00:07 |
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OgO
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Originally posted by Paki
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Originally posted by iKoN
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Originally posted by Paki
I agree with every1 about the mix ...
Exelent ideas but more dynamics is needed espetialy on drums and bassline...
Try to define the scale and key of the synths...
Good idea but very bad performance...
But i like the idea... |
OK well am I atleast getting the idea of structure and focus down. And is my compostition atleast getting somewhat better. Composition meaning do the synths flow with other synths and do they go with the bassline
Edited: I went back to listen to what some of you were talking about. And all it was were the formant filters volume is up to high in certain parts. Is that the only problem is the high pitch distortion that would come in on the drops? |
Synth are goimg well, I was talking about the drums and the bassline
Bassline in drum`n`bass are played on chromatic scale
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I completly agree with Paki
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03-10-2006 00:08 |
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Philthy McNasty
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The more I listen the more I hear the fuck ups. I have had off all day, so I have been tweaking and redoing everything. I will repost in a lil bit. i changed a few things and attempted to master everything, and things flow alot better now, not so muddy. But the main problem was the formant filter and I definetly fixed that. Take a listen when i repost if you want, and tell me what else i am doing wrong. thanks to all who commented
Respekt!
iKoN
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