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cynik cynik is a male
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Please check out my new track 'corrupt sector', post your comments here and vote for it!!!


this started as a track for that remix comp but I liked it so much and did a separate take ditching the remix samples and replacing them

_edit: forgot to say this is just a clip hence the fadeout

comments/suggestions and all critiques appreciated


This track has been deleted on the producer's request

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by cynik: 01-10-2006 23:43.

01-10-2006 23:24 Homepage of cynik
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i really like the 'womp' bass sound. and the lil beeping sounds.. this tunes got a deep dark vibe to it. Maybe you could dirty up the drums a bit more. or layer another break in at certain points. the mix is well done imo. is this clip including the drop, cuz i didnt hear a definate drop. unless it was the beginning of the drums.... sounds very good overall. i likes.

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02-10-2006 00:21 Homepage of BeatJunkie
cynik cynik is a male
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cool, glad you liked it. cheers for the fast response

there are deffinitely drops but not the huuuge sort as it wouldnt fit with the track. but I will deffinitely vary the drums, etc, emphasize the drops..

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02-10-2006 00:32 Homepage of cynik
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Short intro, drumline is cool, snare could use some extra punch. I like the rough edge on the sounds.
Weird silence @ 01:22, sounds wrong imo. Not feeling the transition at 1:42. Nice atmospheric noises and bleeps.

This stuff has potential, looking forward for the final version.

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02-10-2006 00:37 Homepage of BattleDrone
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quote:
Originally posted by BattleDrone
Weird silence @ 01:22, sounds wrong imo.


that is actually glitch which Traction caused, that is not in the reason file. but I'm giving it the boot in favor of ableton soon

cheers for the input

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02-10-2006 00:40 Homepage of cynik
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your production is good.
very crisp. really like the tear at ten seconds Big Grin (sssh!)
needs more variation
the glitch is a bit strange.
all round very nice though. moody

7/10

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02-10-2006 01:30
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Fuckin drum's are real nice man,..perfect amount of crisp,..doesn't hurt,...never easy to pull that shit off,...gettin dam good with your new speaker's Wink ,.....Structure is the best part bout this,...sound real pro,....full of energy with a solid groove,.... got a great layout to add some the mad Cynik edit's n effect's,...mix sounds dam tight man,..look forard to finished version,..cheers Cynik.

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02-10-2006 08:53
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lovnig that beat but you know that already Wink , best sounding beats ive heard from you.

i think you reall need to empahsise (sp) the drops. it kinda feels like its an intro.

liking all the new sounds you've put in. the bleeps are sweet.

sounding good so far man Bigup

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02-10-2006 09:32 Homepage of D2o
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quote:
Originally posted by Dj Jimmy C
lovnig that beat but you know that already Wink , best sounding beats ive heard from you.

i think you reall need to empahsise (sp) the drops. it kinda feels like its an intro.

liking all the new sounds you've put in. the bleeps are sweet.

sounding good so far man Bigup


yeah I added a few stuff to the beats which I haven't before ever. and the compression+ some tape distortion turned out nicely

cheers

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02-10-2006 09:34 Homepage of cynik
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Mixdown is good on this one. Not to really fond of the beeping, but it does the trick. For some reason it sounds like your bassline gets thrown off at around 2:37 either that or there is just to much going on in the bass. Other than that I am sure your not done with it, so i will comment again, when and if you post

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02-10-2006 12:41 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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Now as step 1) Try to make more longer intro....
What happened around 1:20 min why that silence?
Very good second drop exelent mixdown and very good corelation between the synths...
Nice FX and noises... did you synth them by ur self? Huh

The EQ Shocked

Try to "learn" more about midrange freqs(no offence) Wink
Good tune kleep up the good work

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03-10-2006 00:16
cynik cynik is a male
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cheers dude. not bad for an hour and a half's work do you reckon?

that silence bit is caused by my sequencer going haywire on me while rewiring, not in the reason file.

yup yup all sounds by me, well synthing.. no .. I use samples. but all of my samples are recorded bare synth sounds which I heavilly process.

quote:
Originally posted by OgO
The EQ Shocked


is that good eq or bad eq?

quote:
Originally posted by OgO
Try to "learn" more about midrange freqs(no offence) Wink
Good tune kleep up the good work


none taken Smile

cheers for the listen

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03-10-2006 00:25 Homepage of cynik
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quote:
Originally posted by equipped
Fuckin drum's are real nice man,..perfect amount of crisp,..doesn't hurt,...never easy to pull that shit off,...gettin dam good with your new speaker's Wink ,.....Structure is the best part bout this,...sound real pro,....full of energy with a solid groove,.... got a great layout to add some the mad Cynik edit's n effect's,...mix sounds dam tight man,..look forard to finished version,..cheers Cynik.


the key to a good mix guys is good sounds... hence these drums... gotta love the drums Wink

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03-10-2006 08:55
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I have nothing to complain about here, I liked it and I think it's a good track. Drummer

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03-10-2006 11:24
cynik cynik is a male
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I have nothing to complain about here, I liked it and I think it's a good track. Drummer


lots more to do here yet. thanks for the support tho!

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03-10-2006 12:01 Homepage of cynik
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usual quality from u here man,
tight drum production,
nice sub work,
phat bass synths,
structure is always changing as well which keeps it well interesting
only slight qualm is the intro, seems to just jump into the track without any build up
very good track

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03-10-2006 19:03
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im really gonna give this a review tonite ;

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04-10-2006 12:05 Homepage of baz
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im really gonna give this a review tonite ;


nah, pick you up on msn or yet better aim later today for an updated version. just started to add few bits in Ableton which I started working in just recently so.. Big Grin

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04-10-2006 12:26 Homepage of cynik
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intro synth sounds are cool... and bass drops in instantly which is cool with me. drums and bass are cool. progresses really nice... love the atmo and sound fx. the distorted synth stabby thing is cool. yeah the drums are heaps cool, and roll along nicely.
sound wise its sounds good to me through these headphones.
Bigup

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I like the distorted synth at th begining. I dslike the first rhytm, the kick is too deep and the snare is too snappy. Good sound quality. I like the atmosphere going in the background. Ok the break becomes little more diverse now, me likes it. Try lowe the snare's pitch.

Those synths are good sounding (like a rave with reverb or something). The hihats are too snappy, try lowering their pitch also.
Ok the tune goes now, nothing much interesting... and it fades out.

The build up can be done a lot better me thinks. Overall, not a bad track, but still needs work to do.

Well, around 6/10 Bigup

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