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BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Ritim Collishan', post your comments here and vote for it!!!

Here's my first track after a year of trial and error.

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29-09-2006 13:35 Homepage of BattleDrone
Rudeone
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atmospheres are nice. break is good kick needs more hi end. build up might need work. not feelin the synth at 0:42 at all. doesnt really go with the tune. doesnt sound spectacular either. synth at 2:15 comes in nicely.
track needs more groove and a better build up imo.

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29-09-2006 16:03 Homepage of Rudeone
cjstyles
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Atompheric start. Drums are crip. Have to agree with rudeone on this - synth at 0:42, dont feel it adds to the tune at all, and build up needs a little work, the track kinda starts suddenly. - a nice little build up section is at 1:50ish where the tune drops then the beats come back in. After this the track is really nice. IMO maybe get rid of the first bit and kinda start the track off from somewhere around there.

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29-09-2006 20:07
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Hmmm you guys are right, the first synth is crap indeed. Have been tweaking a lot on that one and still didn't get it right. I will probably rework the track completely then.

Thanks for your advice.

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29-09-2006 20:56 Homepage of BattleDrone
maurycius maurycius is a male
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lots of hits but so little reviews

intro is creepy but nothing special
bass nters: needs more lowend. beats are out back, could be breought up more. compression would bring them up but I suggest layering too especially on the snare which feels too clappy. teh kick is a bit non existant, too deep, layer a roughly 120hz one on top.

those vocals feel a bit randomly placed

not fond of how the new elements are introduced. they sneek in which is more a likeness of technoid 4/4 music

keep at it

maury
08-10-2006 22:11
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woah!
weird tune!
just one tune posted by you then eh? why not some more?
this one is old now dude.
drums and atmosphere ok, but the bass is strange sounding.
anyway, old posting so i wont bother giving detailed reviewzzle.
not bad, not great.

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09-05-2007 16:48
cynik cynik is a male
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never knew you did any tunes

al been said - needs more bass, snare could be punchier..

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09-05-2007 18:51 Homepage of cynik
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Yeah, I burried the track Big Grin
It was my first try to make some drumnbass. Been doing loads and loads of other tracks since then, but hardly ever finish something and if I do, I'm not satisfied with the result, so I won't upload it.

Have made some improvements since then though Smile

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09-05-2007 18:57 Homepage of BattleDrone
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