atmospheres are nice. break is good kick needs more hi end. build up might need work. not feelin the synth at 0:42 at all. doesnt really go with the tune. doesnt sound spectacular either. synth at 2:15 comes in nicely.
track needs more groove and a better build up imo.
Atompheric start. Drums are crip. Have to agree with rudeone on this - synth at 0:42, dont feel it adds to the tune at all, and build up needs a little work, the track kinda starts suddenly. - a nice little build up section is at 1:50ish where the tune drops then the beats come back in. After this the track is really nice. IMO maybe get rid of the first bit and kinda start the track off from somewhere around there.
Hmmm you guys are right, the first synth is crap indeed. Have been tweaking a lot on that one and still didn't get it right. I will probably rework the track completely then.
Thanks for your advice.
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intro is creepy but nothing special
bass nters: needs more lowend. beats are out back, could be breought up more. compression would bring them up but I suggest layering too especially on the snare which feels too clappy. teh kick is a bit non existant, too deep, layer a roughly 120hz one on top.
those vocals feel a bit randomly placed
not fond of how the new elements are introduced. they sneek in which is more a likeness of technoid 4/4 music
woah!
weird tune!
just one tune posted by you then eh? why not some more?
this one is old now dude.
drums and atmosphere ok, but the bass is strange sounding.
anyway, old posting so i wont bother giving detailed reviewzzle.
not bad, not great.
Yeah, I burried the track
It was my first try to make some drumnbass. Been doing loads and loads of other tracks since then, but hardly ever finish something and if I do, I'm not satisfied with the result, so I won't upload it.
Have made some improvements since then though
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