Dam big sound at->1:19,...Not feelin intro sound,..the sorta tube sound,..it's carried through tune too,..kill's the vibe,...to happy/cheep soundin imo,..especially when you hit the high notes with it,..anyway minor part of the track, so it don't mean shit really,..thought id point it out,...anyway rest of track is sick,..break's are insane,...beuty unique chop's through n through,..mixdown sounds all good,...dutty track,...enjoyed,....cheers.
Originally posted by anf0 D
so you return from the shadows...
intro is sounding alright with the synths... nice atmosphere.
drums are pretty tight... arrangment good. the bass is alright.
sounding good man.
did anything happen with your gigabyte rmx?? that is dope like herion.
nah gigabyte thing was scrappped... ive progressed a lot since thta tune and i listne to it now and i think its utter crap :-p
lol ur too modest
i know gigabyte rmx is better then this track
maybe as far as like actually edits and stuff...
but the mixdown on that was shit... and as far as progression goes thats where ive gotten ya know... plus its all taste... im way happier with this than gigabyte... too each is own yta know...
Beats are good as well but definately sit too far back in the mix, maybe whack up the kick and snare volume. Another break layered on top could help beef it up a bit as well.
Sub work is pretty good but could possibly do with a little punchiness.
Reeses on this track are definately the best part - well industrial sounding and great atmosphere.
Originally posted by anf0 D
so you return from the shadows...
intro is sounding alright with the synths... nice atmosphere.
drums are pretty tight... arrangment good. the bass is alright.
sounding good man.
did anything happen with your gigabyte rmx?? that is dope like herion.
nah gigabyte thing was scrappped... ive progressed a lot since thta tune and i listne to it now and i think its utter crap :-p
lol ur too modest
i know gigabyte rmx is better then this track
maybe as far as like actually edits and stuff...
but the mixdown on that was shit... and as far as progression goes thats where ive gotten ya know... plus its all taste... im way happier with this than gigabyte... too each is own yta know...
def each to their own... im just saying u shouldnt say its crap... when its not.
Like the synth work in the intro.
The drumz are nice and active
Like the synth change at 2:18
good variation in the drumz
Maybe a breakdown thrown in there would help.
Synth work in this track is OK. But the drum edits are very basic and repeatitive. Not really a roller in my opinion, but I guess it does the trick. Doesnt seem to be much bass in this track until the dark synth lead comes in. The amen adits at 1:52 are pretty tight but then you just repeat it over an over. I would think it would liven the track up if you went nutz for atleast 16bars, then you could repeat that and it would seem not so repeatitive. All in all not a bad track but needs work imo
Originally posted by iKoN
Synth work in this track is OK. But the drum edits are very basic and repeatitive. Not really a roller in my opinion, but I guess it does the trick. Doesnt seem to be much bass in this track until the dark synth lead comes in. The amen adits at 1:52 are pretty tight but then you just repeat it over an over. I would think it would liven the track up if you went nutz for atleast 16bars, then you could repeat that and it would seem not so repeatitive. All in all not a bad track but needs work imo
Hmmm....
The overall sound is somehow muddy....
Synhts ar ok, they are varied....
But u need to count the beats and the bars when u vary the drums.... they sound like misstimed....
try to "release" that amen break not to make it that tight.... espetialy on the first drop....
Originally posted by Paki
Hmmm....
The overall sound is somehow muddy....
Synhts ar ok, they are varied....
But u need to count the beats and the bars when u vary the drums.... they sound like misstimed....
try to "release" that amen break not to make it that tight.... espetialy on the first drop....
Surora, i will not speak for the progress of the track, that is individual opinion. Technically...mmm...
When you do create a synth, don't try to manage it with many oscilators, bcoz every track i have listened from you (no offense), the synths are sounding very padish, not defined it is a bass line or a pad or whatever synth can do. Try to focus on the right side of the idea.
Then don't concetrate on too many things, like mastering or sound synthetics or similar, try to concetrate on the idea, in this case your ideas are producing a sort of confusion and monotonic events. Try to listen as everyone says, something to help you.
Don't play with the highs too often, they are starting to be your manner.
One thing i like is that you create good imitation of well known rythmics, as tech, hard, dark, dilinjas and similar styles of rythmics.
That's it, go on.
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Originally posted by OgO
Surora, i will not speak for the progress of the track, that is individual opinion. Technically...mmm...
When you do create a synth, don't try to manage it with many oscilators, bcoz every track i have listened from you (no offense), the synths are sounding very padish, not defined it is a bass line or a pad or whatever synth can do. Try to focus on the right side of the idea.
Then don't concetrate on too many things, like mastering or sound synthetics or similar, try to concetrate on the idea, in this case your ideas are producing a sort of confusion and monotonic events. Try to listen as everyone says, something to help you.
Don't play with the highs too often, they are starting to be your manner.
One thing i like is that you create good imitation of well known rythmics, as tech, hard, dark, dilinjas and similar styles of rythmics.
Originally posted by OgO
Then don't concetrate on too many things, like mastering or sound synthetics or similar, try to concetrate on the idea,
Don't play with the highs too often, they are starting to be your manner.
One thing i like is that you create good imitation of well known rythmics, as tech, hard, dark, dilinjas and similar styles of rythmics.
That's it, go on.
well this is why in NO OFFENSE BUT your tracks aren't
sounding CLEAN and this has been said by a billion people but a track that sounds GOOD CLEAN AND CRISP WILL BE CHOSEN FOR SIGNING OVER ONE THAQT ISNT SO GOOD AND HAS BETTER IDEAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Surora23: 06-10-2006 19:08.
Originally posted by OgO
Surora, i will not speak for the progress of the track, that is individual opinion. Technically...mmm...
When you do create a synth, don't try to manage it with many oscilators, bcoz every track i have listened from you (no offense), the synths are sounding very padish, not defined it is a bass line or a pad or whatever synth can do. Try to focus on the right side of the idea.
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That's it, go on.
who the fuckl are you people.. do you guys even listen to drumnbass or do you just sit at home and listen to this fucking crap on this site? jesus christ...
Originally posted by OgO
Surora, i will not speak for the progress of the track, that is individual opinion. Technically...mmm...
When you do create a synth, don't try to manage it with many oscilators, bcoz every track i have listened from you (no offense), the synths are sounding very padish, not defined it is a bass line or a pad or whatever synth can do. Try to focus on the right side of the idea.
.
That's it, go on.
who the fuckl are you people.. do you guys even listen to drumnbass or do you just sit at home and listen to this fucking crap on this site? jesus christ...
who the fuckl are you people.. do you guys even listen to drumnbass or do you just sit at home and listen to this fucking crap on this site? jesus christ...
If you like to fuck us, then why not become a member on a porno site, this is obviously not for you.
Ah yes, and if you are the best, what are you doing here? You have to be in contact with some great publishing houses out there.
P.S. Show some respect, but don't cry on everything that is negative upon you!
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by OgO: 07-10-2006 14:45.