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Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Touch', post your comments here and vote for it!!!

This is something i made literally today just so i can open tonights show at club touch....

amen roller... check it


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28-09-2006 02:13
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so you return from the shadows...

intro is sounding alright with the synths... nice atmosphere.
drums are pretty tight... arrangment good. the bass is alright.
sounding good man.

did anything happen with your gigabyte rmx?? that is dope like herion.

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28-09-2006 07:33 Homepage of anf0 D
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Originally posted by anf0 D
so you return from the shadows...

intro is sounding alright with the synths... nice atmosphere.
drums are pretty tight... arrangment good. the bass is alright.
sounding good man.

did anything happen with your gigabyte rmx?? that is dope like herion.


nah gigabyte thing was scrappped... ive progressed a lot since thta tune and i listne to it now and i think its utter crap :-p

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28-09-2006 07:49
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Dam big sound at->1:19,...Not feelin intro sound,..the sorta tube sound,..it's carried through tune too,..kill's the vibe,...to happy/cheep soundin imo,..especially when you hit the high notes with it,..anyway minor part of the track, so it don't mean shit really,..thought id point it out,...anyway rest of track is sick,..break's are insane,...beuty unique chop's through n through,..mixdown sounds all good,...dutty track,...enjoyed,....cheers.

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28-09-2006 08:46
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Originally posted by anf0 D
so you return from the shadows...

intro is sounding alright with the synths... nice atmosphere.
drums are pretty tight... arrangment good. the bass is alright.
sounding good man.

did anything happen with your gigabyte rmx?? that is dope like herion.


nah gigabyte thing was scrappped... ive progressed a lot since thta tune and i listne to it now and i think its utter crap :-p


lol ur too modest


i know gigabyte rmx is better then this track

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28-09-2006 08:55 Homepage of anf0 D
Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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Originally posted by Surora23
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Originally posted by anf0 D
so you return from the shadows...

intro is sounding alright with the synths... nice atmosphere.
drums are pretty tight... arrangment good. the bass is alright.
sounding good man.

did anything happen with your gigabyte rmx?? that is dope like herion.


nah gigabyte thing was scrappped... ive progressed a lot since thta tune and i listne to it now and i think its utter crap :-p


lol ur too modest


i know gigabyte rmx is better then this track


maybe as far as like actually edits and stuff...

but the mixdown on that was shit... and as far as progression goes thats where ive gotten ya know... plus its all taste... im way happier with this than gigabyte... too each is own yta know...

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28-09-2006 19:53
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Beats are good as well but definately sit too far back in the mix, maybe whack up the kick and snare volume. Another break layered on top could help beef it up a bit as well.

Sub work is pretty good but could possibly do with a little punchiness.

Reeses on this track are definately the best part - well industrial sounding and great atmosphere.

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29-09-2006 02:37
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Originally posted by anf0 D
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Originally posted by Surora23
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Originally posted by anf0 D
so you return from the shadows...

intro is sounding alright with the synths... nice atmosphere.
drums are pretty tight... arrangment good. the bass is alright.
sounding good man.

did anything happen with your gigabyte rmx?? that is dope like herion.


nah gigabyte thing was scrappped... ive progressed a lot since thta tune and i listne to it now and i think its utter crap :-p


lol ur too modest


i know gigabyte rmx is better then this track


maybe as far as like actually edits and stuff...

but the mixdown on that was shit... and as far as progression goes thats where ive gotten ya know... plus its all taste... im way happier with this than gigabyte... too each is own yta know...



def each to their own... im just saying u shouldnt say its crap... when its not.

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29-09-2006 03:16 Homepage of anf0 D
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Like the synth work in the intro.
The drumz are nice and active
Like the synth change at 2:18
good variation in the drumz
Maybe a breakdown thrown in there would help.

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Synth work in this track is OK. But the drum edits are very basic and repeatitive. Not really a roller in my opinion, but I guess it does the trick. Doesnt seem to be much bass in this track until the dark synth lead comes in. The amen adits at 1:52 are pretty tight but then you just repeat it over an over. I would think it would liven the track up if you went nutz for atleast 16bars, then you could repeat that and it would seem not so repeatitive. All in all not a bad track but needs work imo

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29-09-2006 21:43 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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quote:
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Synth work in this track is OK. But the drum edits are very basic and repeatitive. Not really a roller in my opinion, but I guess it does the trick. Doesnt seem to be much bass in this track until the dark synth lead comes in. The amen adits at 1:52 are pretty tight but then you just repeat it over an over. I would think it would liven the track up if you went nutz for atleast 16bars, then you could repeat that and it would seem not so repeatitive. All in all not a bad track but needs work imo


faire enough... anymore takers?

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29-09-2006 22:14
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the tube synth isnt really my thing

the beats get a bit drowned out when the huge low pad enters, they need more definition

everything is in fact drenched in reverbs so it sounds a bit muffled, could be a taste thing tho

BUT, def liking the vibe. the main theme is strong. all is spot on tune wise

this could be a huge roller, but with a different mixdown IMO

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Hmmm....
The overall sound is somehow muddy....
Synhts ar ok, they are varied....
But u need to count the beats and the bars when u vary the drums.... they sound like misstimed....
try to "release" that amen break not to make it that tight.... espetialy on the first drop....
05-10-2006 17:46
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Originally posted by Paki
Hmmm....
The overall sound is somehow muddy....
Synhts ar ok, they are varied....
But u need to count the beats and the bars when u vary the drums.... they sound like misstimed....
try to "release" that amen break not to make it that tight.... espetialy on the first drop....


o.O??????????????????????????????????

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Surora, i will not speak for the progress of the track, that is individual opinion. Technically...mmm...

When you do create a synth, don't try to manage it with many oscilators, bcoz every track i have listened from you (no offense), the synths are sounding very padish, not defined it is a bass line or a pad or whatever synth can do. Try to focus on the right side of the idea.

Then don't concetrate on too many things, like mastering or sound synthetics or similar, try to concetrate on the idea, in this case your ideas are producing a sort of confusion and monotonic events. Try to listen as everyone says, something to help you.

Don't play with the highs too often, they are starting to be your manner.

One thing i like is that you create good imitation of well known rythmics, as tech, hard, dark, dilinjas and similar styles of rythmics.

That's it, go on. Smile

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06-10-2006 01:25
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quote:
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Surora, i will not speak for the progress of the track, that is individual opinion. Technically...mmm...

When you do create a synth, don't try to manage it with many oscilators, bcoz every track i have listened from you (no offense), the synths are sounding very padish, not defined it is a bass line or a pad or whatever synth can do. Try to focus on the right side of the idea.

Then don't concetrate on too many things, like mastering or sound synthetics or similar, try to concetrate on the idea, in this case your ideas are producing a sort of confusion and monotonic events. Try to listen as everyone says, something to help you.

Don't play with the highs too often, they are starting to be your manner.

One thing i like is that you create good imitation of well known rythmics, as tech, hard, dark, dilinjas and similar styles of rythmics.

That's it, go on. Smile


That`s what I was talking about... in short
06-10-2006 01:33
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Then don't concetrate on too many things, like mastering or sound synthetics or similar, try to concetrate on the idea,
Don't play with the highs too often, they are starting to be your manner.

One thing i like is that you create good imitation of well known rythmics, as tech, hard, dark, dilinjas and similar styles of rythmics.

That's it, go on. Smile



well this is why in NO OFFENSE BUT your tracks aren't
sounding CLEAN and this has been said by a billion people but a track that sounds GOOD CLEAN AND CRISP WILL BE CHOSEN FOR SIGNING OVER ONE THAQT ISNT SO GOOD AND HAS BETTER IDEAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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06-10-2006 19:08
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quote:
Originally posted by OgO
Surora, i will not speak for the progress of the track, that is individual opinion. Technically...mmm...

When you do create a synth, don't try to manage it with many oscilators, bcoz every track i have listened from you (no offense), the synths are sounding very padish, not defined it is a bass line or a pad or whatever synth can do. Try to focus on the right side of the idea.

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That's it, go on. Smile



who the fuckl are you people.. do you guys even listen to drumnbass or do you just sit at home and listen to this fucking crap on this site? jesus christ...

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quote:
Originally posted by Surora23
quote:
Originally posted by OgO
Surora, i will not speak for the progress of the track, that is individual opinion. Technically...mmm...

When you do create a synth, don't try to manage it with many oscilators, bcoz every track i have listened from you (no offense), the synths are sounding very padish, not defined it is a bass line or a pad or whatever synth can do. Try to focus on the right side of the idea.

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That's it, go on. Smile



who the fuckl are you people.. do you guys even listen to drumnbass or do you just sit at home and listen to this fucking crap on this site? jesus christ...


Wow, wow, wow..... no need to be that hostile...
06-10-2006 19:23
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who the fuckl are you people.. do you guys even listen to drumnbass or do you just sit at home and listen to this fucking crap on this site? jesus christ...


If you like to fuck us, then why not become a member on a porno site, this is obviously not for you. Big Grin

Ah yes, and if you are the best, what are you doing here? You have to be in contact with some great publishing houses out there. Wink

P.S. Show some respect, but don't cry on everything that is negative upon you! Smile

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