Rudeone
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Maybe this track is a bit too nice. Needs to be made more nasty I think.
Not diggin' the bass sound, piano needs work, piano melody ends in a weird way when it's not played in a loop anymore.
It all sounds a bit dry.
With some work this track would be ok.
Keep it up.
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equipped
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Dam nice production as allway's,..drum's could do with some more action maybe,..,..id try n change up to a rollin break for 4 bar's here n there,....also a big mean distorted bass would only add to this imo,.. have it creep in round->3:27 ,..just some ideas to maybe play with,..everything sound's solid on my end,..a lush jazzy chord progression under that piano would be all good,..maybe use some kinda of a rhodes for that,...anyway nice tune Rudeone,...enjoyed it,..cheers.
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25-09-2006 23:09 |
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anf0 D
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the atmospheric pads are nice n full... the piano is alright, it could use a tiny bit of work... beats are nice n chunky... you could probably chuck another kit in there every now n there for some xcitement... and maybe some drastic beat change ups... other then that the arrangment is nice. the drop is phat.. and the bass is slamming through.
could probably have some cool reece come in also for that little bit extra. other then that its sounding pretty good man.
keep it up
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thechronic
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The splashes are a bit artificial sounding, they decay too fast. They're also too loud, cymbals should be gentle touches, these ones seem to go for the throat 
Nice piano, though a bit repetitive. Could be a theme song for a tv show.
I like the structure. Nasty basses, but well controlled.
Overall sound is good, nice little effects in the background.
The end (4:22 - ...) is kinda long winded, seems like you lost concentration and just rechewed some parts to make it longer lol
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Rudeone
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Originally posted by thechronic
The splashes are a bit artificial sounding, they decay too fast. They're also too loud, cymbals should be gentle touches, these ones seem to go for the throat
Nice piano, though a bit repetitive. Could be a theme song for a tv show.
I like the structure. Nasty basses, but well controlled.
Overall sound is good, nice little effects in the background.
The end (4:22 - ...) is kinda long winded, seems like you lost concentration and just rechewed some parts to make it longer lol |
thx for diggin out the old poo
feedback appreciated
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Nick ZZ
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