Gusty - Lovely violin and Wavedub

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Gusty - Lovely violin and Wavedub

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Gusty

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Registration Date: 08-09-2006
Posts: 2

Hi,

This is my two first songs....
I come from Belgium and I learn english this years is England (south of England (chichester)).
I'm not be able to writing five detailed reviews for the moment because my english is bad and I can't be able to write exactly that I think of the differents tunes. Confused

I'm sorry but I hope to progressing quickly in english! Tongue

Thanks for yours comments and your advices!

There are my two first songs. I create these songs with reason and cubase

http://myspace.com/gustywave

Enjoy Pleased

Thanks

21-09-2006 01:23

cynik

Cp6uja

Registration Date: 15-03-2005
Posts: 5,646

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lovely violin:

lol what a name Big Grin

intro: nice liquidy chill
drops: bass is too loud
not liking that violin, sorry. sounds like a cheap vst
neither that vocal "uh" panning
mixdown is lacking some punch, the kick is barely heard alongside the bass
dunno. it's not my style at all so I really can't comment better

wavedub:

I prefer this one over the first
intro: not liking that organ like sound;
drops: oh the bass from the intro is the bassline, dont like that
the break sounds distorted and it would be cool if the track was like that too, but IMO this needs much smoother drums
"drop dead" is repeating too much and gets annoying, as is the bass from the intro
that lead is nice, some potential in there. I'd try turning that an octave or two down and make it the bassline
generally not bad, but some things get in the way to be really good

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https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves

23-09-2006 16:39

wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental

Registration Date: 13-09-2006
Posts: 465

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Hi Gusty,
The first one is too repetitive imo, didnt like it. The violin sounds strange. Dunno. The second one needs some volume adjustments becasu some of the effests are too lound and u cant hear the beat( for example the voice sample is too loud). The beat is the same all the time. The track lacks originality imo. Keep it up man.

Cheers

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23-09-2006 22:28

Gusty

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Registration Date: 08-09-2006
Posts: 2

ok ok !!

Thanks a lot for your constructive advices!
I had to use a dictonnary for understand all yours comments! Big Grin

but yours reviews will help me a lot!

Thanks you!! Big Grin

cheers

25-09-2006 18:03

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