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Philthy McNasty
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Whats up all. I have been working on this track for almost 2 weeks now,fidgiting here and there. And this is the first track that I truly used some uniformity from my unorthodox wayz. So please take a listen and #1, tell me if my layout and mixdown are better than usual. #2If there is anything I need to work on. #3 and tell me what you think of the track so far. Which if it is true and most of you say takes months to finish a track, I am not even close to being done. I would just like some help, and to know what you think!
RespekT!
iKoN
The Sickness
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=582893
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19-09-2006 22:45 |
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dj milkman
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Lovin the begining very sick and twisted i like. the sample is fukin sick as. im really likin ur main downbeat and breakdown very good breaks it up well then kicks off more than before which is good. i dont partifually like the drums that much but there quite effective. to be honest this isnt really my style of dnb so cant really comment that much. but i would say its pretty good a lot of positives mate. can tell u have taken a lot of time and effort into it. hardcore mate.
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19-09-2006 23:57 |
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cynik
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loads of bad distortion all over, though might be the crappy soundclick quality streaming
the synth sounds like someone practicing a guitar and is not quite skilled. which is not bad in a twisted way I guess.
drums are not bad, they are sequenced nicely, they sound a bit too lofi though
but the structure is pretty non existant, not much in terms of buildup, drop etc, the drums just slam in and go on. not my cup
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20-09-2006 00:04 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Thanks to the 2 of you out of 30 that helped me out. Cynik no harm no foul I dont want sugarcoated feedback. But if you could be more specific on things i need to work on, because i am to the point now....where i can make good beats, and decent basslines, no I am just trying to learn how to lay it down proper. I have been looking at DnBwiki.com And trying to incoperate everytihng i learn. So please if any of you have negative things. Please say so, I need to learn from my mistakes you know. thats what this community used to be about. Helping others grow and expanding the DnB community. Not people getting fat heads and thinking they are the shit, and people like me how are learning and are quite unorthodox need guidance, and now adays, not many people want to teach....per say
Respekt!
iKoN
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20-09-2006 05:18 |
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cynik
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20-09-2006 08:16 |
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anf0 D
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20-09-2006 10:16 |
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