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Rudeone
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http://www.ez-ru.de/downloads/audio/prev...-_held_pre1.mp3

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a little atmospherics wont hurt

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yeah man, the eq of the breaks is nicly balenced imo.. good solid kick drum
the atmos is fitting for the intro 'feel'...

vox on the breakdown is sweet, i would add more delay and fuck it up a bit although it sounds ok as it is along with the simple melodies.

drop: does whatit says on the tin, some nice synth lines in here, i could imagine listening to this whilst driving home late at night on the motorway, already images are coming to mind for a music video to go with this.

okay, its very very simple overall and that bassline could be even louder imo...

but you are obvoiusly improving these days and have a real taste for this mellow side to dnb, a very competent piece of work that has good clear driving drums my only advice would be to add some more obvious melodies but then its a fine line between adding some more shizzle and cluttering up the tune with pointless sounds for the sake of it.

really enjoyed this tune, after a few plays i forget how many times its played showing it has a nice mellow groove.

how did you make the snare?? is it layered?

cheers Drummer

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thx for takin the time glim

i agree, its still pretty simple. i wanna put in some nice lead melody, a better stronger bass and more stereo fx.

the snare is layerd with two main snares and two snares of the breakbeats im using. then equalization and compression with the right attack

cool that you like it Smile

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Trancey. im feelin TNB these days. very x files this is. nice intro. very tidy production.

The break down is a little empty. id have expected something bassey here.

I dont know what you were aiming for with this one. but i was feeling a reall evil bassline. it works well with alot of trance and bass.

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thx for your comment. ill put in another baslline.


and.. i fucking hate trance Shocked

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Hahaha i reckonise that break. dc west coast break Roll Eyes

any ways.....

nice pads. and sounds in intro
perhaps the piano could be louder.....
what does the vocal say?
yep the piano should be louder IMO
the drop is ok....nice melow tune
needs more low sub
the beat needs filling out with more percussion
a nice airy ride would be sweet Big Grin

overall not a bad track. its sounding nice but its not your best.
needs more going on in the main track. a couple more elements coming in and out would be nice.

the piano is real nice may favourite part. Big Grin

What programme you use?

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piano louder? ...done
the vocal says 'ich tat es fuer euch, mit dem schwert' Tongue
uhm cant mix the sub proper cuz i dont have one Crying but ill replace the bass i think.
ye tryin to add somethin to the beat.
hmm needs some lead or something. gonna put some more work into this one

im usin cubase sx2 and kontakt


thx for listenin jimmy.

gonna check out your tune on my good speakers, tomorrow... Smile

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quote:
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the vocal says 'ich tat es fuer euch, mit dem schwert' Tongue


in english Tongue

with the track perhaps you could drop just with a simple bass then introduce a lead after say 16 or 32 bars so it kinda drops for a second time if you get what i mean Confused

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ye sure, ill do somethin with it tomorrow. need to go on a rave tonite Smile

the vocal is from the movie 'hero' he says 'i did it for you... with the sword' so it doesnt make any sense at all but... i kinda like it Smile

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nice drums... the atmosphere is nice and trancy la la...
the piano sounds nice and la la which adds to that nice atmosphere your goin for.
that vocal sample is a bit strange. the one before the drop is nice.
the drop its self is good... nice bassline, and atmo action.
def not my style of jungle but its good for what it is

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Sounding really tight my end.Nice use of sounds.How long have you been making beats?

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ye sure, ill do somethin with it tomorrow.


Confused finishing tunes aint ez Crying

quote:
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Sounding really tight my end.Nice use of sounds.How long have you been making beats?


thx, two years now

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