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Lightningflash 
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Registration Date: 25-07-2005
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Please check out my new track 'volumeExperiment', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
I just want to know if this appeals
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"EVERY FAILURE BRINGS WITH IT THE SEEDS OF AN EQUIVALENT ADVANTAGE."
Theres more here http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showband.asp?id=18745
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09-09-2006 22:35 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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it appeal's on my end,...beuty sound's,..not feelin the choppy part's,..track sounds much better flowin,... has dam nice synth's all over it,..enjoyed,..cheers.
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09-09-2006 22:48 |
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exhumed
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Registration Date: 08-02-2006
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cool tune. its refreshing. the choppy part is interesting. if i were you i would put a riff running through the choppy part so that it seems unstable but stable.. feel me?? its cool though, a chill tune. maybe put a chorous or main verse in it. a chorous that just flows.
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10-09-2006 00:58 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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This has a nice ambient feel to it.
The pause @ :13 before things happen doesn't work for me.
Those choppy, suttered breaks seem very out of place; and also don't seem to fit with the style/ vibe of the track.
Very nice synths. They all sit well, nice melodies & such. Good work on these.
Drums are a bit boring. I'd change them up without using those choppy breaks you have.
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10-09-2006 01:57 |
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-TJ-
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Registration Date: 05-09-2006
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melody is good
but those drums are making me sleepy
maybe add more beats or differend drums
anyway it's a nice start IMO
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10-09-2006 13:02 |
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cruiza1986
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The whole thing is a little bit short....
okay..
Intro : Nice beat, nice pause! The bass is stopping a bit too much there feels a little empty.
Synths or sampled sounds there go well with those pad. the pad also stops at the end of the bar. dont do that let it flow. and please dont cut it like that IMO it sounds like a shit dj is mixing and decided to start cutting the cross fader randomly.
Again this is another song that lacks direction within its motive. Theres nothing that really says to me.. yea this is music. its just a few samples glued together and chopped up. kinda like a stir fry. its all in peices!
Overall 40% good 60 % bad
Work on your mixing too. its not too bad though on a positive note!
cruiz
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10-09-2006 19:40 |
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Lightningflash
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Registration Date: 25-07-2005
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Im very grateful for your help
I was rely interested in the attitude towards the volume affect
I think Ill drop it
But ((exhumed)) had a great idea
So Ill try that first,
thanks
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"EVERY FAILURE BRINGS WITH IT THE SEEDS OF AN EQUIVALENT ADVANTAGE."
Theres more here http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showband.asp?id=18745
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15-09-2006 00:41 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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The intro leadin into the break is strange, and the the intro to the bass is very strange. But that is my opinion. i like how you did the spacious bassline and break at about 1 minute in. The tune get very repetitive, and just spacing out the break and bassline wont keep a listeners attention imo. Out very plain and does the trick. Nice job! If you tchange up the breakand bassline, this tune will become good instead of ok.
Respekt!
iKoN
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15-09-2006 03:29 |
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