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cynik 
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Please check out my new track 'subordinate [dnb.be ver]', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
ok back to give you this little thing Ive been working on. nothing fancy, just an idea in the works. it's got unclear vocals so I cut them for this version so it might feel a bit empty
I didn't have any internet up to now but I'll be back in two weeks and check a load of new stuff as I've seen people of .be were very busy which is good.
cheers
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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07-09-2006 14:43 |
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hawkinsa21
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Hey mate, I've only just joined and this is the second tune I've listened too...
I like it, its got some dark vibes from the word go, and I especially like when it breaks and then kicks back in around 2:40... and 2:48 I nearly busted in my pants... lol sounds good!
Have you made many tunes??? I'm guessing yes you have... I'm gonna start soon as well, been mixing DnB for over 6 years, bout time I put some ideas to digital recording! 
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07-09-2006 15:52 |
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baz
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review commin up 
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07-09-2006 16:06 |
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tryptech
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Damn Dark INtro, good effecs,
Waiting for break now, Nice shizzle with the beats, but they need yet some more layers I think, nice effects through whole song, but sometimes some emptiness.
Good Job
Greetz
Scaranja
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07-09-2006 16:13 |
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D2o
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07-09-2006 16:51 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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I like the intro, but you need to seriously tone down that hi end.
I think I'd prefer a drop or for you to have something happen before everything starts, not much of a build up.
Bass is nice.
I like what is happening at 2:36. This is nice.
Everything sits pretty well in the mix besides that intro.
It's cool, but you need to make it a little more interesting, it is a bit boring right now.
Add some more FX/ ambience or things so it very subtly changes over time without ruining a lot of the nice things you have going here.
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08-09-2006 02:27 |
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BeatJunkie
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listening...
whoa, wikked ass intro..... nice synth and sparse drums... (at points)
kinda minimalistic... reminiscent of a Teebee tune.
*bows*
seriously good stuff man. nice n textured. i like this tune alot. i dont have alot to say, you know ure stuff.
sry for the lack of a real review, but this needs very little.,
excellent work.
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08-09-2006 16:59 |
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equipped
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this some sick shit,..does sound real empty at point's without the vocal's,..but dam man your ideas are the shit,..totally unique and fresh,..nasty shit at->2:48,..lovin yur cyblz at->4:27,..4:37->filthy,...nasty edit's all over this beast,..tight ass tune,..look foward to hearin this beast complete,..big ass!,...cheers Cynik,..hope ya had a blast in Greece. 
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08-09-2006 17:34 |
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-TJ-
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damn i like it man, keep them coming 
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08-09-2006 17:36 |
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cruiza1986
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Heres what I think
Intro : Yes, this is the best intro I've heard so far since visting (just today) Everything has its place here and that impressed me straight away. The cheap snares gotta go or replaced with something better.
Hi end percussion is tidy as fuck and the synths are the nice to binrg in that bass.. just edging to come in.
the bass so far is nice. randomly organised if that makes any sense.
Yes this is nice. the intro is long liek the rest of the tracks ive heard. but it has a meaning and i know why you made it like this.
I can feel it. i hope this gradually picks up mpre though. coz i do feel a bit of emptiness around 2 mintues odd.
yes breaks down again... please just be great i can feel it
get rid of the chopiness or use powerful samples. it needs something in the mid range and top end here. theres nothing .
the end is a let down in terms of the amount of time spent building up an emotion. You got me all excited and then toned down your approach. which i dont like!
and then the tune is pretty much the same. no real big climax. all though the production work and mixing (to a certain extent is gr
starts off 100% good
but then slips down to 60% good 40 % bad for the reasons i mentioned above ...
cruiz
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10-09-2006 20:26 |
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anf0 D
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this is sounding sick... awesome intro... love the synth work, sweet as.
the bass tease is really nice... im waiting for some mega intense rollin drop. drums are sounding sweet... need some more phat sub punch i rekon and they would be really close to noisia drums
2.26 n im waiting for the mega drop. i dunno... its fkn good...
but i dont think you should have went progressive with the bassline
for so long... you should have a little bit of a tease in the intro...
then around 2.30 have the bassline drop in full force and progress with
synths n percussion or something. phat bassline and synths.
quality shit man, as always.
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16-09-2006 02:19 |
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baz
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shyte ; still haven't reviewed ; gon tek care of it today !!
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16-09-2006 11:20 |
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baz
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geve it a quick listen now ; think the buildup is to long in compare to the drop ; i'd experiment with some automated distortion on that bassline ; "could" really benefit;
i'll review more in detail when i get home 
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16-09-2006 12:05 |
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wrm
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Hi Cynik
I listened to your track. The intro is interesting, various effects took place in it but the noise on the beggining( the one that keeps getting louder) is bit too noisy
to many highs for my taste. The beat is simple and it fits into the whole thing. Yeah the song made me wobble. U could change the bassline though. Its a bit repetitive. But I liked the whole song. Keep up the good work man.
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16-09-2006 15:29 |
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Greyone
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intro is super 
cynik style you know your stuff.
realy reminds me on Noisia but you do your own thing with it so its awesome.
bassblending bitch
sounds very cool.
arangement is a bit strange for me , intro is too long compared witht the drop that follows.
drop could use a second drum layer like a firefight but thats just me.
realy cool sounds and variation but the only thing that bothers me is the structure of the track , sounds a bit all the same for me.
anyway i love this track , keep it up man
restecpa
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17-09-2006 17:51 |
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cynik
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@Jimmy: yeah man, that snare in the intro is left by mistake
the high synth fuckups are due to the fact I havent given this a proper treatment as I was in a hurry
thanks all for the reviews. I'm glad you're mostly liking the track although it's in a sorry state a bit now. I just saw you guys were busy with the new tunes so I'll be checking a lot of stuff these days.
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