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benji b
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Registration Date: 27-06-2006
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hey ho
so far this tune is pretty good for startin off, but there is room for improvement.
i think it needs more to it, more layers. u have put in a couple of melodies in but they're not that strong, u need to balance out all that bass and i think adding more melodies and higher pitched fx would do this.
also i think u should beef up the drums slightly (maybe add some more distortion to make em sound dirtier) and add variation to keep the track interesting. u could also put in some more drops perhaps.
you've got a bloody heavy sub which i like! but u should try to make it evolve throughout the tune, perhaps.
doesnt sound quite right when u lose the bassline an drums near the end. wat u've done would sound good if u bring them back in after 4 bars or so, but to end the track off i think it would be better to fade the drums or bass out.
hope this will help
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03-09-2006 19:30 |
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equipped 
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..that wobblin bass sounds beuty,....when cheap synth stop's->1:05,.. this shit sound's heavy dutty,..simple but effective roller,..good ol bongo loop should do the trick,..really diggin this man,...powerfull track,..doesn't need the synth's,...slap some vocal's over instead,..this shit's dutty,...cheers. 
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03-09-2006 19:56 |
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tryptech
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Intro, nice the melody reminnds me somehow on a prodigy one,
Nice breaks, nice subsonic mastering, indeed still romm for improvement, but nice for not being finished yet.
Sub is really great, around 2 15, like atmo there.
Great song. Especially sub
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03-09-2006 23:29 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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So far so good.....The bass is heavy. And I agree with equip the synth doesnt do this track justice. The beat is a little repetitive, but the bass keeps you into it. Sound quality is awesome. I would add an eerie pad, and I would darken up the piano riff at the end. I would also add a stuttering vox. Other than that its off to a good start!
Respekt!
iKoN
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04-09-2006 06:03 |
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anf0 D
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the little xilaphone(spelling?) thingy in the intro is really cool, nice mellody... the sub is mega bass heavy...maybe roll it off at the really low frequences. the drums are alright, they could probably do with some layering to get the punching through nice n thick.
pretty cool, finish it off.
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04-09-2006 16:27 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Nice intro, set the mood well.
I'd change that comes in 00:43. Seems a bit light to me.
The ride sounds fuzzy to me. Too much reverb??
Drums could use some more oomph. I'd layer some more hits over them. Also chnage some of the drum patterns, they are a little too prdictible.
Cool start tho.
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06-09-2006 06:29 |
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cruiza1986
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Intro : Bass has gotta go from the intro. unless it changes in tone.
bells are a lovely approach to this song. When the bass starts to change it sounds a bit better . but it does sund a little empty on the sound spectrum.
Breaks here are fuckin lovely man good job. but they lack punch here. i like this break alot! the kick is too subby. u have a sub bass and then a sub kick. I would avoid using them both.
Nice ideas here all round im diggin it alot. but the only problem is the bass is so weak compared to the style of music. it needs some warmmmmmm instead of wormm if you understand the idea behind my music to txt description!
This track is almost finished in my opinion. just needs something else going on and some power breaks/bass
overall 80% good 20 & bad
cruiz
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10-09-2006 20:48 |
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BigFire
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Registration Date: 09-01-2005
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Yo just checked out this song......
good sound quality. bass is a litle loud.
8 notes to make a song? your were just raggin on me for that.
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Where's the fucking bass??!!
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11-09-2006 23:29 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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luv this intro, much more darker sound from you here, the bell sound is great maybe make more of it with delay and stuff...
i really like the beatz that drop , really sound rolling but the melody that you have on top of them is an element that is introduced way too quickly imo.. it immiediatly sounds like the tune is at halfway point of winding down, then everything cuts out just a little too much,. the sub action in this track i really like, it almost has a kind of wobble to it, 2:30 and there are some low bass notes that i cant hear properly, maybe its my setup..
the brreaks are sound as if there is too much high-end in them, but overall the tune is rollin and as said before a bit more of a darker feel to it than previous tunes you've posted.
nice one rude
cheers
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13-09-2006 12:55 |
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Rudeone
love & light
Registration Date: 15-10-2005
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bass and rides are nice.
not much goin on though...
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