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Please check out my new track 'Gokyo(added some poo)' and post your comments here!!!
added some more sound's n bass,..drop still need's work....tried to get the drum's rollin more at the intro and got rid of allot of thing's with the suggestion's in the last update,..so thank's to all that reviewed previous version's,..that shit was much appreciated and helped allot,....hope to have a tune of this soon,..cheers.
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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03-09-2006 09:03 |
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aight ;
intro--->eerie shizzle ; lovin the gong like stuff in there (does clip at 0:23 seconds tho; try fixin it )
drop has gotten lost better ; still could use something a lil extra (i myself would put a bombarasclaaaaaaaaat sample in front of the drop)
gotta give it to you again ; some wicked jungle drummin in here 
subs could be turned up a bit in the midsection(fill the spectrum 
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still diggin this one since i got thru the full 7 minutes an stayed focused
keep workin on this one mad poo-master maggoo
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03-09-2006 17:54 |
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cheers Baz,..yeah it get's rather boring toward the end,..gonna fix that with some building pad's,..,..didn't change much really,..but added allot of crazy little sound's n snippit's to the drum's,..anyway,..you gave me good idea bout drop,..cheers Baz.
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03-09-2006 19:42 |
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tryptech
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Great gonging, this track keeps getting better.
Breaks are nice, love them they keep changing.
This song is constantly changing, lots of effects, lost of variation.
This is some nice shit though i like your jazzy shizzle more.
2 52 has some nice effects there, like a plane landing, sounds like a big city there.
This song sounds really like a living city, like it a lot.
How many hours have you worked on getting your break together?
Nice nice nice, now is getting a little bit borring cause its stays the same now. (around 5 minutes)
Good song, god work. nice mastering.
Cya
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03-09-2006 23:41 |
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Philthy McNasty
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I cant remember whether or not I critiqued the first time u posted, but fuck it. I am digging the vibe with this one. I know I have told you before, but you definetly have that LTJ style, and you keep getting closer and closer to that vibe with everytune. Beats-average,Bass-fucking sick, atmo-very mellow. Rate #10/10
Respekt!~
iKoN
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05-09-2006 00:16 |
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Thank's Scaranja & Ikon,..all good on the reviews,...love addin load's of background layer's,..that plane sorta sound is thank's to the mighty Virus,...break's were the first thing i did,...took a few day's but could be have easly been done in a day,..i dedicate a whole project in cubase to just my break's,..only cause my computer couldnt handle it any other way,..anyway thank's for the word's guy's,..allway's helpfull.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by equipped: 05-09-2006 06:48.
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05-09-2006 06:47 |
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Stutterstep
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whats up equipped,,
Its been awhile,, track sounds sick!!!!! Intro is very nice,,, Lots goin on, and it all works,,
I like the drum break ,its got a nice rythmn,, I think its missing something, maybe another loop to thickin it up or more hits,,,
Bass line is sick,,, I love that filtering you are doin with the bass,, those drops are perfect...
all around very good track ,, its nice to hear,,, Hopefully you can make it out this saturday to arnolds,, we got 3 toronto boys out!!! should be a killer!!!!!!! 
love to see ya
Tom(Everest)
i love more poo
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09-09-2006 03:38 |
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cheers Stutterstep,..track still need's allot of work,..but glad your diggin what's there so far,....check your "PM" box.
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09-09-2006 22:28 |
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wicked man 
never heard the first but this one is cool
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10-09-2006 12:58 |
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cruiza1986
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Intro : This sounds like a Sci fi film. I like these types of intros. The growl is distorting try and fix that out with some damp reverbation and Eq the parts in the distorted frequencies. nice break added. randomly great..
ooo the drop is quite nice man
Drop : beats are cool. cept they do sound choppy in a way. they sound like theyve been gated. let them release a bit more. or add an amen in an roll of alot of the bass. just to give the mid range a boost.
I like your bongoey percussion.
The bass is nice IMO. It has this gritty feel to it. nice wormpey sounds on variation. This is dark music which I am in big favour of!
Nice job, the mix is pretty level all round! Try some panning and auotmated pans/sweeps. they would work really well with some of the effects youve got going on in here.
After the second drop, there needs to be a significant change within the concept. the bass stays almost the same if not the same. I just feel somethingnew and unexpected should be used within its apporach.
Yea. nice job. pretty simple track though. but it DOES have a professional feel to it. It doesn't however have any commercial value to it (possibly intended).
Overall its 75% good and 25 % bad
On a happy note its great all round. I do try to be as constructive as possible though. so no hard feelings again for my being honest!
cruiz
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10-09-2006 19:47 |
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cheers for the reviews,..glad y'all are diggin it,..@Cruiza1986-->like the idea of changin the notes on that sub,..will forshure try n sort that,..tunes ever changin,....takin fat rest's from it to get fresh idea's,...takin a long ass time but thats all good for quality edit's,....thank's again for the idea's,..allway's helpfull,...cheers.
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11-09-2006 05:05 |
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Rudeone
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wheres the kick and the snare?
the breaks and fx are nice but it doesnt really get me groovin
id prefer some straighter drummin and more drive to the whole thing.
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11-09-2006 11:41 |
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thank's guy's,..yeah it's way to long n boring atm,.. and that right side problem at intro suck's big time,...when i recorded all the sound's through me korg vocoder,..it was rigged the wrong way on my mixer(only right side),..don't know how to fix it without redoin the whole thing,..so might just slap another intro in there,..@Rudeone,..tunes has no groove to it i know,..it's more of an edit's fest than anything at the moment,..gonna try n fix that,..still needs loads of work,..cheers guy's,...helpfull stuff.
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12-09-2006 01:15 |
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anf0 D
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love the intro... would be sweet to open up a mad new skool jungle set.
this is sweet as, i really like it... although i think the sub might be clipping?? dunno could just be me.
the structure n use of sound fx n effects is really nice.
mad smokin track
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16-09-2006 02:25 |
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Nosrac
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Whoa man - that opening horn and lfo sound mix is pure madness - the sub build is so damn nice - pure sound engineer stuff going on in there - serious attention to detail. The drums come in a bit suddenly but pack a wicked punch. Nice and crunchy and the added layers, reverse cymbals and other loop make this into one seriously unique loop work - not your typical amen yawners (no offense to the amen, but more to what people do to it).
The sounds are where this track really excels - so many god damn layers!! And all made from scratch on the virus C - incredible. That alone accounts for the massive amount of work that goes into your tracks. Must make those producers taking 10 samples off a pack and rearranging them over a few chooped loops feel pretty silly.
The edits towards the end get nuttier and nuttier - I think some people are missing some of these subtle gems cause' they nearly had me falling off my chair.
The sub isn't quite as warm and smooth as in Hope Your Well and the track could use a more distinct stucture of intro, drop out, variation, but nonetheless it is a clinic in sound design and gets top marks for going against the grain and dealing out some pure insanity!
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