iKoN - The Weed....Man??? |
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Please check out my new track 'The Weed....Man???' and post your comments here!!!
Another tune I have been working on. If you can think of anything I should add or fix, let me know!
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Lol.
Sample is perfect, but the song is just drums & effects right now.
I want to see lead and bass melodiez in here.
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31-08-2006 22:19 |
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Paki
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This song has a lot of potential in it man
The drums r perfectly syncopated with the bass...
So my advise(acording to my taste) add some atmosphere in here...
Play little bit with the pitch of the bass and make some dynamics using samples and noises...
Do the melody thing... try not to emphasize the lead... just to be noticed
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01-09-2006 00:54 |
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Philthy McNasty
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01-09-2006 10:02 |
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dj milkman
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Alrite mate im new here but just listened to your track.
I like it, the sample at the begining is well good and the ambiece in the backround goes in well with it makes it more dark.
The drums n bass are awsome and really well together and its good how you break it up and change it.
I like it all part from the ending you should try and fade it out or maybe even have the sample at the begining at the end aswell to slow it all down and finish it.
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01-09-2006 12:32 |
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TeeHaichSee
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HI there!
I like the production quality of this track, but it doesnt have enough "oomph" maybe some compressor in there over the whole track would help phatten things up a bit.
Maybe layer another break (also sliced) over the amen. it sounds stuttery and a little bit empty by itself and repeats itself a bit too much. Theres not enough variation to it. Later on where you added the delay to the break improves things ten fold! a bit Omni Trio, Renegade Snares-esque (and thats not a bad thing imho!)
The intro is nice, very atmospheric and does a great job of building up, but I was a bit disappointed when the initial amen break came in. I kept waiting for a second break to come in and it never did.
This track has some serious potential, and with a few minor tweaks here and there, could go from being a good track, to being a great track
I hope I've been helpful!
Regards,
TotalHarmonicControl aka Matt T
Please feel free to review my track!
http://members.iinet.net.au/~toyne/THC%20-%20plutons.mp3
thank you
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01-09-2006 13:46 |
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It only needs some atmospheric effects to finish it
Nice drums
Nice bass
greetz
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01-09-2006 14:13 |
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Philthy McNasty
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02-09-2006 00:47 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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This has a lot cool stuff going for it IMO.
I think you could perhaps layer some other old school breaks like hot pants and think to add interest to it. Breaks are a bit redundant even tho the edits are nice.
Not enough bass going on IMO. I'd make it a little more prominent.
TBH, the vocal samples bore me, and are the least effective part of your track. I'd personally rather you remove them and concentrate on wicked amen edits and fat bass.
Really nice start, this is sonding cool
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03-09-2006 08:35 |
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Paki
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As I`ve already said there is no need of melody in this tune... Just DYNAMICS...RESPECT WHAT OTHER PEOPLE WRITE... JUST ATMOSPHERE(PADS OR STRINGS OR SICK NOISES) R NEEDED
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04-09-2006 15:09 |
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downloadin,..review in the work's.
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05-09-2006 06:50 |
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what's up Ikon,...sorry for slow response,....checkin the update,..funky vocal's,..lovin the break edit's,..break's off time at->1:25,..thing's get a bit messy toward the end,..get the feelin you did on purpose,..makin it ruff as all hell,..which is all good imo,....track's packin load's of unique break edit's,...enjoyed it,..cheers.
__ Space
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06-09-2006 20:32 |
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