 Paki - Child Abuse |
Paki 
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Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Child Abuse' and post your comments here!!!
The tune isn`t mastered ...
So please post ur comments about the genre and overall idea...
This track has been deleted. Reason: Paki has been banned from the site for creating a second identity and trying to cheat the voting system.
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30-08-2006 22:58 |
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tryptech
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Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Nice effects in the intro,
creepy, nice drop
nice beats, around 3;47 it's just perfect, evil
youre beats sound well but they sound as if yu have just used different loops after each other. But its a style I can agree with.
Greetz,
Scaranja
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30-08-2006 23:32 |
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OgO
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Registration Date: 04-11-2005
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The track is cool dark ambient... very popular genre. It's a kind of darkstep subgenre i think a? Ok, you need to spend much more time on mastering bcoz the track looks like it has to be mastered with predefined presets, but there is much more on doing with equing( i prefer using Firium plugin for EQ phase line mastering or Steinberg's Freefilter), but ok about that later 
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What reffers to the genre, although it is so popular nowadays, u`v made awesome tune of darkstep here:drummer:
Intro needs some build-up,beeing little longer.
The first drop.. ahhh... what a "dangerous" breaks... Excelent firefight break loads of jingles... that`s what i like in the tune:dummer: (individual opinion)
First break... psycholdelusional...very odd atmosphere
The second drop... change the tactics in recognition of it bcoz it is kind of same..
U r using sounds in the second break that r in the first one also... they r often presented in the tune
Bassline... creepy "reese" bass sound... Awesome
No errors, and very creative... I guess live patterned?:drummer:
Pads and atmos.. I`v already said creapy and dark...
Keep it up man
Rate this tune 10/10
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30-08-2006 23:45 |
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J. Wells
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This track is wicked. 
Yeah, it needs to be mastered, but before you get to that point I think you should maybe revisit your drums and the bass. They sound flat, a little mono in a bad way, just in the way that the tracks themselves lack definition-- particularly stereo definition. Bring them to life somehow, like a touchup with a multiband compressor/audio exciter combo maybe, and you'll have yourself a serious contender. And I suppose the atmospheres could use a changeup, just to keep things more dramatic... but overall this track is in good shape.
Keep 'em coming.
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31-08-2006 07:01 |
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SARIN
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This is EVIL!!! It needs a proper mastering though, but the basic is there and it's a killer.
Me like....
Nice edits, maybe I would use a bit more of the same break, it sometimes sounds a bit chaotic.
Not bad if I may say so....
Cheers,
SAR!N
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31-08-2006 09:55 |
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Paki
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Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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Originally posted by J. Wells
This track is wicked.
Bring them to life somehow, like a touchup with a multiband compressor/audio exciter combo maybe, and you'll have yourself a serious contender.
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I thinkthere is no need for that... It`s exelent firefights(the drums) and bassline is created with chorus so only eqiung would solve the problem and overall dithering
Anyway thnks for the usefull feedback all of u (SARIN, J Wells, Scaranja, OgO)
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