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tryptech tryptech is a male
Tryptech


Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Simple' and post your comments here!!!

Just want some feedback on the my drums, (Improvement)

and the bass.

Thanks


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ANALOGUE (Tryptech)

25-08-2006 16:28 Homepage of tryptech
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This tune is way to fast for my liking, About 200bmps or sumting.
Drum beats arent controlled enough at the secongd drop, ie you can hear the beats slapping over the top of each other. they dont sound right. Get some more sub bass underneath what you've already got to give it a more wholesome sound.
25-08-2006 19:36
Paki Paki is a male
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Ok the intro is very dark and intrigant:-)
Nice morphing on the drums in the intro...
Exelent work with the compression and LFO in the first break...
The bassline goes well....
Good idea with the square and flange on the drums....
Well u`v could make more different drums instead of continued use of flanger... the drums r too loud in the second drop...
More synths needed and more samples to spice it up...
And some more vary in the second drop....
Need some work over here...
Overall the tune and the first drop r exelent but need some more invention in the second drop...
Rate this 6.5/10
26-08-2006 16:05
tryptech tryptech is a male
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Thanks Paki,

Yes I know the song was not quite finished yet.

I'm pleased you like the intro and firts drop.

Thanks for the reply.

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26-08-2006 19:44 Homepage of tryptech
D Juice D Juice is a male
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man this is weird.

the kick and snare are both too soft and require both equalizing and i miss a bassline.

the intro is kinda cool

then later on it becomes even weirder when you get 2 beats and play the second one one some microseconds afterthe first.

probably you need some more practicing and shit. thats what you get if you put many hours in to reason or whatever program u use.

good luck

d juice drum 'n bass

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29-08-2006 15:14 Homepage of D Juice
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nice)
19-08-2007 10:51
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