drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » equipped - Gokyo(still in the works) equipped - Gokyo(still in the works) Author Post equipped tired Registration Date: 20-05-2005 Posts: 3,818 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Gokyo(still in the works)' and post your comments here!!! Finally startin to make something of this,..didn't do much changin really,....just added a bunch of new stuff,..intro and drop are where im havin problem's,..you'll hear that the drum's kinda come outa nowhere,..just doesn't fit as is,..so any suggestion's are all good,..might even change intro all together,..drum's are a bit shit at the start but later on thing's start to roll much better,..will try n sort that,..cheers for all the feedback on my previous clip,..hope ya'll dig this so far...cheers. This track has been deleted because a new version is available __ Space 25-08-2006 08:59 cynik Cp6uja Registration Date: 15-03-2005 Posts: 5,646 Helpfulness rating:  sorry mang only on headphones it's a really great intro, you delay maniac those huge strings in the back remind of Noisia the beats are alrite but I'd do with less ghost snares - less is more. the bass is deliicious. is that the virus? heavy low end and a nice sizzling top. dig that jean michelle jarre little trippy bleeps, goes well with the sci-fi theme throughout there is maybe too much atmospherics for my tastes. but thats only tastes so.. and it does fit in as a whole. I was kinda hoping to hear a pure drums + bass part though some damn nice edits on them beats! right, this is really going to be a killer once you finish it. really feelin it, keep at it!! 9/10 __ https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves 25-08-2006 10:38 Paki Cool Steppa Registration Date: 03-04-2005 Posts: 248 Helpfulness rating:  Interesting dark and horror intro.... some more work on the stereo... I hear some bienia at the bassline and the bass drum... try to lower the compression on the bassline... Dynamic drums... Interesting synths... awesome... but shit vocals:-((( They don`t fit in with the atmosphere... Like the filtering and the atmos in the background... well mixed(i`m listening on headphones right now). somewhere at 3:00 min it is repetitive... maybe some variation or more enhanced drums?:-) Or maybe u could make the bassline more agresive?:-) definetely needs work on the stereo... try not to make it so "obvious" Maybe if u shorten it it will make it less dull.... If u continued with the layer of the quazicymbals at 1:28- 1:30min and then place it again at 3:00min it will give some more dynamics(but that`s me and my style) The synths r well balanced and dynamic... well done.... Very good use of fx and reverb.... Overall it is very colorite and it has it idea... The track keeps on going and it drives :-)))) If I rate this from 1/10 i would give it 9.5 (just for the vocals and not includeed mastering I never rate mastering) So keep it up I`m looking forward of the new finished tune:-)))) 25-08-2006 14:02 baz 7 Registration Date: 19-02-2005 Posts: 1,531 Helpfulness rating:  review soon __ "shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw" 25-08-2006 16:02 tryptech Tryptech Registration Date: 16-08-2006 Posts: 853 Helpfulness rating:  Intro is great, Nice drums, fuck the drums are nice, also in the intro Awesome bass, Vocals are indeed not fitting in the song. Nice effects, __ ANALOGUE (Tryptech) 25-08-2006 16:43 N-FETT Producer Registration Date: 20-08-2006 Posts: 28 Helpfulness rating:  The beginning flies at me on the right receiver why ???this purposeful? Broken nicely Brejk. Bass gives the advice. One should still here change something according to me because this alone still flies. He something lacks me still here. Add still one Break and some melodies in the background and it will be well. I like sounds in the background. Do I not have restrictions what to masteringu. The production has the even quite good climate. You have good skills in doing works. __ http://www.myspace.com/nfett http://soundcloud.com/n-fett 25-08-2006 16:52 Electric Sky Producer Registration Date: 07-08-2006 Posts: 17 Helpfulness rating:  Nice atmospheric intro. I'm not usually a fan of this drum pattern but in this case it fits the track perfectly. Wicked bassline variations that keep the track flowing perfectly. Production is also top notch. Not much more to say. This is a quality tack. Keep it up. What programmes do you use?? 25-08-2006 19:54 hardplnsdrftr Streetcleaner Registration Date: 07-03-2006 Posts: 271 Helpfulness rating:  That intro is fucking sick, nice 1! But, as you stated, you need to somehow get the beats started without being so abrubt. Your drums are quite good, they have a nice 'shuffling' that sounds very unique to me. I really like what you done with the break & drums you use. Really nice. Your bass is also killer. Very nice sound u got there. Very profeesional sounding mix. Everything comes through very clean and crisp. IMO, you have everything you need already contained in what you have here; it's simply a matter of arranging the elements to be most effective. I think if you arrange this track properly with a clear intro/ outro, you would have yourself a real winner!!! __ "Trouble is the common denominator of living. It is the great equalizer." Søren Kierkegaard http://www.myspace.com/hardplainsdrifter 26-08-2006 01:44 Philthy McNasty Florida DnB Masta! Registration Date: 23-07-2006 Posts: 1,088 Helpfulness rating:  Loving the intro. Drums are definetly sort of weak, but the delay adds another layer that wouldnt have been there. It is a bit toooo repeatitive for me, the bass tweakn is sweetttttt. overall its a good tune, but I would change up the break a little more, it kind of lost my interest in the song, but the bass kept me listening. Much respekT! iKoN __ http://www.myspace.com/philthydubbish 26-08-2006 02:18 baz 7 Registration Date: 19-02-2005 Posts: 1,531 Helpfulness rating:  intro is crancin ; great atmo there ; drop is oldschool junglist styleeee drumeditz are cool but coudl go with some more (insane) variation times where u let the beat fall away for a few steps an drop it back =wicked an weird idea ; like it subs could deff be turned up ; also i'd try an go with adding another sub (one that wobbles more (envelope time ) keep it up ; looking forward to an update __ "shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw" 26-08-2006 11:48 equipped tired Registration Date: 20-05-2005 Posts: 3,818 Helpfulness rating:  shit ....thank's for all the positive helpfull fucking review's,....some real good helpfull idea's,....@hardplnsdrftr->well said bout having all elemnt's and need to arrange most effectively,...will try n do that,..and @Electric Sky->Use Cubase SL,..Kontakt 2,..and a couple hard synth's....thank's again for all the helpfull review's,..will return all review's. __ Space 26-08-2006 19:25 Glim Stuck In The Late Nineties Registration Date: 16-10-2004 Posts: 1,848 Helpfulness rating:  :drum beware on shitty work headphones bro) some new equipped shizzle i see... yeah baby luvvin it straight away, epic feel to the sounds and delay on them, fuck man like war of the worlds machine noises.. yah this is soundin phat bro, those breaks do come outta nowhere but thats even better than i could imagine was goin to happen, haa that little break of silence is excellent, shit man this sounds fresh maybe its coz of the great crispy breaks that have good balance and levels in the track or maybe its the feeling that everything has a place a tune that has elements that compliment eachother - yes theres lots goin on but its like each sound is not over played leaving me wanting more of each part... likin this very much mate , you know how to roll out your breaks god damn it boy!!! nice filter on the breaks here n there, this is making me want to get out my mic an start free-styling over the top, phat idea come onto my mind, fucksake could jam on the guitar to this one thhis is really good Equipped hope you keep rollin out stuff this good now.. shit that intro sound is mean, fuckin mean i tell ya!! wicked shizzle best i've heard on this site for a while see you in a bit bro.. G __ My Sounds 27-08-2006 06:30 daze_DND MYSTIC Registration Date: 01-11-2004 Posts: 327 Helpfulness rating:  some stereo issues in the intro and in the breakdown later on ....look at that. too much comming only from the right side at times beats are mental.....but i'd make them more rolling and naturall. A bit hectic on the bass and reece stabz...but it works. Dunno about the 'rhodes like' sound in the background...doesn't quit fit imo....kindah kills the dark feel a bit for me. u've done some serious heavy edits .....impressive! yeah the beats are really tense....must have taken u a long time to work all that out. Not really my cup of tea but this is a heavy track. Defo work on this. Dazee D __ info/tunes :: MySpace 27-08-2006 11:31 equipped tired Registration Date: 20-05-2005 Posts: 3,818 Helpfulness rating:  cheers for the helpfull and motivating word's Glim and Daze DnD,..allready workin the drum's at intro to make em roll more,..the right side sterio issues are a big problem,..i don't know why it happened,..my shitty monitor's hide it,..but in my car sterio,.the whole intro is on the right side,..i really need to get a couple ghetto blaster's or something so this shit stop's happenin,..next addition to the studio for shure,..thank's again lad's,..will for shure finish this,..glad everyone's diggin what's there so far,..cheers. __ Space 27-08-2006 20:26 Philthy McNasty Florida DnB Masta! Registration Date: 23-07-2006 Posts: 1,088 Helpfulness rating:  I love the intro, very dark and nasty. Break is a little simple, but you are the delay master, cause I cant get a sound like that out of my basic breaks. Bass work is pure illness, but the break just doesnt do this track justice. But if its still a track in the works, I am sure there will be something different next time you post. Hopefully another break or something, but keep the bass & FX just how they are. Much RespekT! iKoN __ http://www.myspace.com/philthydubbish 27-08-2006 20:35 Hidden identity Wicked Producer Registration Date: 17-02-2005 Posts: 441 Helpfulness rating:  I like it. now all that I want is to hear a lead in it, but you've got ambient sounds + bass already, so it's good as-is. Thanks for the upload; take care. __ I'm trying to unfuck my sig. 28-08-2006 21:24 equipped tired Registration Date: 20-05-2005 Posts: 3,818 Helpfulness rating:  cheers Ikon & Hidden Identity,..feedback much appreciated. __ Space 30-08-2006 00:03 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » equipped - Gokyo(still in the works)