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D Juice 
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Registration Date: 15-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'D Juice - Paratricks RMX' and post your comments here!!!
This is a Remix of a track i made like half a year ago, the beat there was kinda crappy but i really think the melody is kinda catchy so i went on producing a remix , en after that, i remixed the remix 
so thats why its called Paratrixrmx 2,
well i hope you enjoy listening this one, i'll enjoy reading your revieuws and ill hope it comes out clean
thanks,
D Juice Drum 'n Bass
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"Could God microwave a Burrito so hot, that he himself could not eat it? " 
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23-08-2006 13:15 |
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Electric Sky
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Registration Date: 07-08-2006
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Will review this when I get back home tomorrow.
This computer I'm using now is proper shit
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23-08-2006 18:21 |
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Sephiroth
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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the bang and reverse sweep at the start sound lush and the go into a nice sounding build up, melody is a bit dodgy, the atmospheric sounds are good tho and really add suspense to the tune, arrangement is pretty good on the drop, some strange drum variations tho. The bassline is okay but sounds a bit hidden behind the drums, try lowering the drum volume a bit and gettin a better snare imo.
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23-08-2006 22:06 |
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ethex
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Registration Date: 02-02-2005
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yes yes man,feelin this one!
nice pressure after the drop!
wicked synthlines and all the shizzle!
use more drum variations!
and also dont use that spinwheel in a random place.. sounds lame..
Great choon though!
pce!
6/10
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24-08-2006 01:58 |
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daze_DND
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Registration Date: 01-11-2004
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intro is good (like the orchestra sounds)
didn't expect the smooth melody...but it works....
Then the break before u bring in the reece is a bit to long imo...reece needs more dirt imo....more 'graaawl'
When it drops it reminds me a bit of phantom audio 'mayhem' (wich i love to bits)
from the drop the drums are a bit too 'light'...needs beefing up....
Like the re-entree of the smooth melody...
Dunno about the hip-hop beat-part...doesn't add much imo (maybe work to that a bit more....to make that part stand out more)
Overall i like the vibe of this, simple but effective...
I would work on yr overall structure ...add some fx here and there to support the 'mood' of the track (bit like those orchestra-stabs but mayb not as drastic as those)
Work on this man! The elements are there....
Good track
(srry if this didn't help , i m not very good at writing reviews)
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24-08-2006 11:33 |
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Kinexion
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Registration Date: 11-05-2004
Posts: 31
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24-08-2006 20:58 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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That intro is pretty nifty....the shakers were warping my mind though. And that drum build up into the break is pretty sweet. The beginning breakdown is the exact thing as the intro, so you might wanna redo that, its a matta of taste though. But once the track hits its sweet as shit. I agree that the atmopad does not fit the track until 4:00 or so when it gets dark sounding. But you did good on this on. Just curious though do you have an oldskool breakbeat background, because your breakdowns sound like techno breaks to me or atleast that kind of style.
Much RespekT!
iKoN
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24-08-2006 22:18 |
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D Juice
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Registration Date: 15-08-2006
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well i do think you're good at reviews, i know exactly what u mean man!
and i know its true!
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25-08-2006 11:49 |
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D Juice
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Registration Date: 15-08-2006
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Hey guys, big up to yall, for reviewing my song.
ive been using reason 3.0 for this one. been busy with qubase but dont yet understand it.
thanks!
D Juice Drum 'n Bass
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"Could God microwave a Burrito so hot, that he himself could not eat it? "
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25-08-2006 11:50 |
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Electric Sky
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Registration Date: 07-08-2006
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The basis of this track, I like but i'm not sure about the melody.
Beats and bass sound nice and i like the break.
Not sure about that guitar thingy??
Still sounds ruff though!
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25-08-2006 19:23 |
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