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Electric Sky Electric Sky is a male
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Registration Date: 07-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Luv4U' and post your comments here!!!

Some vocal lick, nearly finished
23-08-2006 09:38
daze_DND daze_DND is a male
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took some time to listen to this (as u did with our track)

so here it goes...

like the rhodes(?) with the pitchbend-move and the piano comming in
Vocal is naice...
yr beat seems a bit 'dry' , needs more punch and variartion imo...
like the idea of the wobble bass (although i'm not a fan of that sound) but it is to clean , need to beef it up imo....get some dirtyness on it (well that's what i would do)
overall this is a pretty good track...

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23-08-2006 10:10
D Juice D Juice is a male
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well, i have to tell you i really fancy your melody but it needs to be a little more complicated, like everything in your song. beat needs to be more complicated, and the wobbly bassline doesnt cover your beat all the time , which it should. Wink

i think if you put in some more time in this, add some cymbals to your beat, add some breaks to it and complicate your melody, you should be able to get a great track out of this. its just too simple now.


Goodluck

D Juice Drum 'n Bass

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