muphasta 
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22-08-2006 22:13 |
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lokius
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love the intro vibez.. nice sounds..... wish the break was a bit more upfront/clean. love the hi end synths after the drop, work really well... on the whole i like this tune for its originality and sound selection... i would have like to hear a diff break..... maybe more low end on the bass??? .... im feelin the sounds though....
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23-08-2006 00:21 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Intro is very nice, I dig those bird sounds and whatever fx you have on them, I also really like that tablas(or whatever it is?) loop there.
Your main break is kind of wimpy. I would like it stand out a bit more. If you compress the break a tad, it can give it a lot more snap while preserving your sound.
Overall this actually sounds pretty good, everything seems to sit really well in your mix.
I guess I'd just like your drums to be louder and have bit more smack to them, they are bit too quiet also.
Your bass seems to need a bit more also, doesn't have much low end it seems.
Cool vibe, I think your percussive elements are really good, such as the tablas I mentioned before or the bell loop at about 1:34. Just make your main breaks stand out a bit more, and more low end and you will have a really nice smooth track here! 
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23-08-2006 08:11 |
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D Juice
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i just love this shit.
few adjustments maybe
-more Powerfull beat by using other samples
-little less hihats in the powerfull piece
-more tuning to that reece kinda thing
-intro doesnt fit to the dark theme in the song
few ups:
-cool dark sounds link those twingles
-nice atmosphere you created using those bongos
-cool melody in the powerfull piece
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23-08-2006 13:30 |
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Hidden identity
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Registration Date: 17-02-2005
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I like it, wholely.
8/10
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25-08-2006 11:27 |
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Lightningflash
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Registration Date: 25-07-2005
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I liked the intro
put some drums over that
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