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lokius
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Please check out my new track 'Instructa' and post your comments here!!!
a dark techy wobbler
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22-08-2006 15:27 |
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lokius
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it gets a bit sloppy right at the end, but im too lazy to uplaod a new one now so.... enjoy
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22-08-2006 15:31 |
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tryptech 
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I have nothing to say about quality, but this one is not my taste. But thats personal. But th production is well.
Good work.
200BPM?
The breaks may come a little bit more to the frot I think.
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22-08-2006 19:54 |
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Electric Sky
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I'm feeling this one.
The bassline rolls along nicely throughout.
The beats sound a bit low in the mix but that might be my system??
Apart from that it's a good track.
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22-08-2006 21:53 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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This is a really cool Neuro roller IMO. I like the sound, layout, and feel of this one, it has that nice smoothness of Stakka or robot death squad track feel to it.
I really like the way this song is layed out. And your sounds are great.
But the drums are way too quiet. They need to be a LOT louder IMO. I also think that you bass needs to growl a little bit more. Perhaps some more distortion, and a little more volume on that bass.
I really like this track, but I think you need to address a few issues. Still very cool tho.
I do really like this 1. Please finish it.
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23-08-2006 08:23 |
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D Juice
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I Love the intro, except for the beat.
that is pretty shitty. the beat gets really shitty when the bass comes in,
also: the bass seems to be just on 1 tone! wtf? the breaks are kinda crappy, so are the drops,
but: that sound you create at 2.40 is really really cool
you can create a funky neurofunk lead outta that man.
you should really upgrade the beat and add a litte reecy crap to your bassline.
the breakidea is cool but need just to be worked out better
you gotta put a lot of work in this one, maybe a whole new drumcomputer orso, but i think you can get a great result!
good luck
D Juice Drum 'n Bass
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23-08-2006 13:36 |
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lokius
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thx for all the comments.... a new one is in the works,, gonna change the beat altogether maybe..... look out for the evolved version soon...
CHeers!!
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25-08-2006 15:57 |
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-TJ-
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than where is that one ??
i feel this one so i really wanne listen to the other 
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09-09-2006 00:15 |
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lokius
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09-09-2006 00:58 |
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-TJ-
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thanx
it's not that i'm lazy, i just really can't find it :s
btw: the track is awesome 
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09-09-2006 20:28 |
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lokius
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thanks dude....really appreciate it
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09-09-2006 22:00 |
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cruiza1986
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Intro : ooooooah yea! feeling the intro right away! Nice little bass sound. sounds like its got no bass but i can feel it going to kick in. The beat when it comes in is nice and unique (in terms of rolling breaks).
Keys are nice filtered in the way they are. There DOES seem to be a level of distortion here..
nice synths . filter that bass!!!!!! Fxs building up to the main drop is something im excited about. it stands out and makes me want to hear the tune already....
Drop: okay what happened here. It started off so well! the breaks and everything are the perfect choice for the tune. but the levels are all set so wrongly. Please listen to this tune in headphones, maybe compare it with other tunes that are similiar. When i say listen, i mean listen. Don't sit there doing something else. I mean literally listen and do nothing else but pick out where sounds are placed. Your sequencing isn't bad.. its the mix. Level out your sounds. find your sweet spot on your monitors. most monitors sweet spots are directly 60 degrees centre to an equalateral triangle. Kick and bass should always be around the same level in the mix. kick maybe slightly more for a punchier effect. use eq to bring out the bass and compress your kick and bass channels. Kicks have a fast attack... so compressor setting will have to react fast. ( fast attack and release). some of this might not make any sense. but research mixing and compression before you add any.
This Does sound like the compressor is just squashing loads of levels that are plainly just too high in the mix.
on a happy note. nice sequencing though. and a good approach to a DNB tune.
40% good 60% bad though im afraid buddy
cruiz
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10-09-2006 20:01 |
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lokius
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i was wondering if u listen to the version called instructa, the newer version is called trilobyte.... i never checked the mix part... maybe never will...might just get someone to do it for me.... thanks for comments
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11-09-2006 00:57 |
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