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Nouveau_Riche Nouveau_Riche is a male
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Please check out my new track 'The Machine' and post your comments here!!!


I made this track in Reason 3.0. It's not quite finished, you'll notice that it's missing an ending, but I don't feel like working on it anymore. Mastering is probably crappy since I don't have monitors yet.

Let me know what you think, and if it's worth finishing

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Nouveau_Riche: 21-08-2006 20:26.
21-08-2006 20:24 Homepage of Nouveau_Riche
tryptech tryptech is a male
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I like the intro but I dont like when youir break come in fully so the shit with the echos very nice. Your break is rather bland, so maybe you can change that shit. And what you need is a series of sick bass moves when your break comes in. It will make your song more special.
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21-08-2006 20:50 Homepage of tryptech
XTensionTrigger XTensionTrigger is a male
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Too much sub sounds in your track, need's re'equed/remasteringed...

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21-08-2006 22:15 Homepage of XTensionTrigger
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It takes too long to get started..... without any real build up, quite a simple beat, bass sounds quite cheesy... the build up at 2:12 is pro the best part... not much to review in this tune....
22-08-2006 15:46 Homepage of lokius
D Juice D Juice is a male
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your drum samples are really instrumental like they sound, they need to get more synthetic. Try layering your drums.

i like the beat, and the intro with the really low string on it, though its not interresting enough.

but what the fuck? there is absolutely NOTHING happening in your track!

this is toooo boring man! this is just the beginning of your track. this is not what you should post! man, its really to empty, i think the intro is cool but the tune is just not even on a quarter of the work you should probably put in it.
this is not yet worth revieuwing probably.


put more work in this one!

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23-08-2006 13:41 Homepage of D Juice
Lejitt Lejitt is a male
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I like the moody intro, its quite dark.. good use of delayed percussion.... and I really like wot u av done with the drums when it drops......BUT the drop isnt intense enuf, you could have made a better impact with it ..... this tune could be really fat if u spend more time on getting the drop right.

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26-08-2007 17:19
Lejitt Lejitt is a male
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I like the moody intro, its quite dark.. good use of delayed percussion.... and I really like wot u av done with the drums when it drops......BUT the drop isnt intense enuf, you could have made a better impact with it ..... this tune could be really fat if u spend more time on getting the drop right.

Peace (Definatly finnish this track)
26-08-2007 17:20
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