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20-08-2006 17:11 |
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Philthy McNasty
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I dig the intro, but you have to have more of a lead in when your break comes in, cause it comes out of nowhere, also, turn down the LFO output, its a little high, either that or filter it. But once the tune comes in, it sounds cool, I would lose the piano, and the Lfo thing once the break starts. Maybe some weird soudning Indian voice would be a good lead in. But I am digging how you are fucking with your basslines more, its not constant like your first couple. Respect on that and at 1:46 that is some sickness, you needed to keep going with it, not break it up, and then start it back up cause that shit was sounding ill. All in all a good track if you keep working at it, but lose the bubble thingy at the end 
RespecT!
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20-08-2006 21:52 |
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tryptech
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You mean I must get lose of that whole after the Break has already started once on 1. 46
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20-08-2006 21:56 |
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20-08-2006 21:56 |
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You think there must be alead in for the first break. I liked cause it entered the song without you would exect it. I will see. What do you say bout equalizing
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20-08-2006 21:59 |
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Nouveau_Riche
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First thing I would change about this tune is the piano. The melody in the intro is very basic, and doesn't really add anything to the atmosphere. Also the piano sounds quite dry and high, so I would either change the melody and the patch you're using, or just drop it. And those couple of piano notes during the break sound really out of place.
Another thing I would change is the break in the second part of the song. Now it's very recognisable, so maybe try layering some other samples on top of the break. You could also just use the snare and kick from the break, and fill the rest using samples.
And also the first drop comes completely out of nowhere, maybe try building it up a little.
Another thing that puzzles me is the title
I didn't really hear any indian influences, so it's seems kinda strange. But off course it's just a title.
just my 4 cents, hope it helps
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20-08-2006 22:09 |
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Yeah right away piano is not doin anything for the track,..fuck sake that drop got me good,..got to go change my pantie's now,..well done,..that reece stand's out to much around 1:28,..proccess more for this part,.,..reece sound's good now beside big break,...some evil flange shit in background,..this track sound's better than earlier track's,..startin to get a feel for your break's,..and that's another thing,..your startin off usin break's instead of one hit's,..lot harder but good to get good at em,..cheers.
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20-08-2006 22:21 |
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tryptech
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Thanks mate,
I liked the piano, just taste i think. I already deleted it in the break cause it was indeed not nice fitting there. Jeah the title is just a title. I dont know but it reminds me somehow at India. I dont get whats wrong with the breakbeat in the second drop.
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20-08-2006 22:22 |
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tryptech
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You mean just elongate that smaller break to 8 seconds and then the silence and then the break
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20-08-2006 22:45 |
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BUt i dont wanna use samples I wanna make all myself accept the voices. But thanks dude. Maybe I can add some extra hihat action.
Jooe
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20-08-2006 22:46 |
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Originally posted by Scaranja
BUt i dont wanna use samples I wanna make all myself accept the voices. But thanks dude. Maybe I can add some extra hihat action.
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don't wanna use samples?,..samples are the best.
,..just make your own...a sample can still be your own thing.
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20-08-2006 22:50 |
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tryptech
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21-08-2006 02:07 |
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Nouveau_Riche
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Originally posted by Scaranja
BUt i dont wanna use samples I wanna make all myself accept the voices. But thanks dude. Maybe I can add some extra hihat action.
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Well, if u want to make it all by yourself it would seem more logical to build your own break using samples instead of using 2 almost unedited breaks made by someone else. It's very clear that u just used the "nate furious da bonna skunk" break and the "nate furious taste my pain" break made by dave akuma. I'm not saying it's a bad thing to do, but it would be nicer if you made them a little less recognizable and added your own little touch. You could start with slicing them up, and rearranging some of the drums patterns.
Cheerz
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21-08-2006 15:49 |
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tryptech
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Shit,
I posted the wrong version, I also have one with my own breaks in it in the second part. The first part was totally homemade because I wanted the second part to be harder I checked dave akumas beats, nice beats by the way. But I will post my song with the second break in filled up with my own.
Thanks dude
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21-08-2006 17:18 |
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