 sephiroth - Helter Skelter |
Sephiroth 
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Helter Skelter' and post your comments here!!!
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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18-08-2006 18:33 |
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Sephiroth
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oops...didn't realise that i uploaded a really shit quality version, will upload a higher bitrate version as soon as possible.
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Sephiroth Soundcloud: http://soundcloud.com/sephiroth_rees
Sephiroth Myspace: http://www.myspace.com/sephirothdnb
C-Sonix Soundcloud: http://soundcloud.com/c-sonix
C-Sonix Myspace: http://www.myspace.com/csonix
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18-08-2006 19:38 |
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J. Wells
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Registration Date: 10-02-2006
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Since I only listened to the lo-fi version, I guess it would be silly to try to review this track from a production point of view. However, I think I can review a few other things, like composition and the overall aesthetic you were chasing.
First of all, the song lost my interest at about 1min.40sec, where the synth lead comes in. Those keyboards don't sound cool at all, they sound underproduced. Compositionally they serve their purpose as leads, but they leave a lot to be desired as they come off as flat, squeaky... a little Casio Keyboard in the wrong way. This also goes for the big, long, sweeping note-bend breakdowns, with the exception of the one you close out the track with. There's a definate potential for more there, so much that it sticks out like a sore thumb.
In terms of how you arranged the song, you're fairly spot-on for the most part: nothing extraneous, no obvious mistakes, no big fuckups. This song isn't something a total amateur would write, and I could definately hear it having a prominent space in a good mix/set. However, I don't think it steps over the line into being innovative, and the cheesey synth leads have a lot to do with it. That sound is the centerpeice of your track, responsible for guiding the listener through the rest of the song. If it sounds uncreative, simplistic, whatever... then it's not doing its job as well as it potentially could. Given how the other elements of the song sound, I have faith that you could go further with it.
Now run with it.
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18-08-2006 19:56 |
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cold intro, although the "sweeping" noise gets a bit annoying.
dont like the bass noise, the intro was cool but im not really feeling the the change.
its alright.head nod stuff.
but my mate thinks your naff. only an opinion though...
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18-08-2006 21:04 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Killer tune man,..just some them sound's like those string's-->2:17-2:37,..not good,..and more variation would be all good on background noise through the start,..high pithced sound at->3:20 doesnt sound good,.. track has a great roliin vibe,...stick with darker sound's and youve got a smasher,.tunes for shure a treat,..more of 4:55,..that shit's rippin,...cheers.
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19-08-2006 09:00 |
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Electric Sky
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Registration Date: 07-08-2006
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This tune has potential and the basic stucture is good.
But im sort of feeling what other people are sayin about the synth sound. It dont sound right, but I like the bass. Cant really say much more due to the quality.
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19-08-2006 10:15 |
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