hardplnsdrftr
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Registration Date: 07-03-2006
Posts: 271
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I like the beeps in the intro... cool sound.
The drop doesnt work for me, it needs to build up somehow before it drops, maybe a sweep or effect or something.
Your sounds are cool, but don't quite seem to be meshing together correctly for me. Your bass drum and dnare could use some reinforcement with layering I think, both seem a little too quiet, esp since the hihats cut through so much. That old school "oh yeah" sample seems out of place to me.
I really think this track has lots of potential. I really like the sounds/ samples you have going , you just need to arrange and EQ your track to bring everything together.
__ "Trouble is the common denominator of living. It is the great equalizer."
Søren Kierkegaard
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