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Please check out my new track 'Chill'Out' and post your comments here!!!
Do you like it, please review
Thanx,
Scaranja
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17-08-2006 16:50 |
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lokius
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interesting hi hat action, light atmos, me tinks jungle is comin...... i think i hear a break,, but a very light un compressed one? what is that wierd sound tha tcomes in at 1:20 around??? i am quite puzzeled by this song... no structure, can hardly hear any part of the song clearly... i assume this is a very early attempt.... this needs loads of work mate.... you need to give the beats more punch using a fat multiband compressor. you need to add more sounds, more layers, different hi hats.... dont be discouraged, keep at it man.... what prog/equip u using?
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17-08-2006 17:05 |
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17-08-2006 17:13 |
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tryptech
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Thanks for the reply, I'm just a beginner I dont know how it all works with those compressors.
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17-08-2006 17:15 |
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lokius
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17-08-2006 19:20 |
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Philthy McNasty
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First off the intro is kind of kool but shouldnt be right when the song comes in, that seems like it would be a good synth later on in the song. I agree about the hi hat that is pretty niffty. I dig the bassline action but it is too constant. Then the break comes in it really doesnt fit, it needs to be more kickier, and needs to be more on cue. It seems off temp to me. Then you go off with the sitar thing, which is really weird to me, but kind of adds a little weirdness to a song that is weird already. I dunno what to really say about the style it is definetly.......different. You need to change things up a little more in your songs though. But right at the end I dig the reasonance bassline, that was real cool should be more of that in the song. Anyways, song is a good layout, but needs a lot of work. I would rethink that break, and change the pitch every now and again on the bassline, to have the appearance atleast of the bassline changing somewhat. Keep at it! 
RespecT!
iKoN
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17-08-2006 19:53 |
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tryptech
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Thank you all,
Thank you lokius, but it seems the compressor is standard in FLoops 6.
Cause of you I know understand the meaning of the compressor.
Ikon your a very good artist I wish i could make drums as good as your. Do you have a tip to get that typical drumnbass move. I know the basic but theyare so boring, and i dont know how to get the speet in the snares and hats in it.
Thanks you all.
Greetz,
Scaranja
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17-08-2006 20:17 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Originally posted by Scaranja
Ps Is this song really bad or is it acceptable for working a month with sequencing drumnbass |
you have a nice layout man....dont get me wrong....i think its just that break is what makes the song so off key, and if your break is off key then your whole song is fucked in my view. Just take out that break, and try something new. Baz is the one to talk to about making beats in FL6 I use acid pro kick snare hat, then render to a new track and do that over and over. i could teach you that much, if you get acid pro.
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17-08-2006 21:48 |
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tryptech
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Thanks,
But I think that I stay with fruityloops now for a while, cause I am just improving a little bit with that program. I shal ask baz if hes online sometime. Thanks for helping,
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17-08-2006 22:20 |
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lokius
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Hehe, im still on fruity loops 3.54, i hope i can upload some tunes soon...
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18-08-2006 04:52 |
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Rudeone
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some nice effects in this one. not really sure about the melodies though. you need to work on your drummin. can hardly hear a kick
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18-08-2006 14:23 |
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tryptech
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Thanks mate, I'm working on my kick
I tried to make some weird shit, it seems to have happened.
Greetz
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18-08-2006 14:26 |
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