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Paki Paki is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Blood of Misery' and post your comments here!!!

It isn`t mastered but I tried to mix it well


This track has been deleted because of copyright violation
16-08-2006 04:11
hardplnsdrftr hardplnsdrftr is a male
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Pretty cool track. Production is very nice. Everything for the most part seems to sit well.

I don't care fore the vocal (talking) samples. Not exactly sure why, but they seem to not site in well with everything else. I don't feel that what is said in the samples fits either for some reason, but that could just be me Tongue .

I kept wishing for a change up with a higher pitched/ clangier snare. I suggest adding this in few spots, using it instead of that flanged break that seems a bit overused in this track. I also think if you changed up the breaks more often it would be more interesting, I kinda got bored midway.

Overall just I think just minor changes to some parts would make a big difference, as you have most of the elements already there in this track.

Sounds nice though, finish it up.

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16-08-2006 08:12 Homepage of hardplnsdrftr
Philthy McNasty Philthy McNasty is a male
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Man I like the intro, it gets you ready for some nastiness. But there isnt much kick in there and the LFO is kind of sketchy.this tune has serious potential, because intro gets you ready for some sickness, and the the last 30 or so secs is where the sickness begins, you need more stuff like at the ending towards the middle and try and laydown a new ending or something like that. The layout is good for now, but needs some work. But Im sure you know that.

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16-08-2006 10:08 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
Paki Paki is a male
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Man I like the intro, it gets you ready for some nastiness. But there isnt much kick in there and the LFO is kind of sketchy.this tune has serious potential, because intro gets you ready for some sickness, and the the last 30 or so secs is where the sickness begins, you need more stuff like at the ending towards the middle and try and laydown a new ending or something like that. The layout is good for now, but needs some work. But Im sure you know that.

Respect!
iKoN


Yessss... thanks dude on the feedback:-)
Thanks hardplnsdrfrt
But the general idea???
16-08-2006 11:02
tryptech tryptech is a male
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The intro is perfect,
Please dont change it, let it be, you know certainly how to work on fruityloops.
The structure is also well found, the repetition of the intro or the voices in the middle is nice. Your breakbeat i very simple and may be expanded a little bit. Some more hihats or snares. Your basswork is excellent, the end is a little bit crappy it stops may youd better fade it oud. Of course when its used in a mix its perfect. Nice track, not many bad things to tell about it as you see, thats cause i like it.
Greetz

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16-08-2006 20:14 Homepage of tryptech
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nice one on the vocal's,..drum's sound dutty,..bit to much high's goin on at my end Frown ,..hurt's the ear's a bit,..track's missin a good sub,..might just be me speaker's but even when sub at->4:33 drop's,.. is real mid soundin,..anyway, you got some real good idea's goin on,..diggin all the sound's used and the background vocal's work well,..not easy to pull off,..might just be on my end with the edgy mixdown,..so no worries,..track's a treat,..cheers Paki. Smile

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17-08-2006 10:06
thechronic thechronic is a male
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Removed for copyright violation, contained samples from the movie 'Silence of the Lambs'.

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17-08-2006 17:12 Homepage of thechronic
cynik cynik is a male
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grabbed it!

silence of the lambs is all good in my book

just try to not make it so obvious next time. black sun empire got away with it in "don't you"

the bass in the intro feels a bit casio-ish, could use some (more) dirtying up IMO

when it drops it does with full power - feelin it

obvious phasing of the beats is not bad but feels kinda rinsed out, overdone. maybe try a dryer setting?

I quite dig how the track develops, though the atmospheric parts could be given some more attention

good production overall. nice teksteppy roller. you progressed much since the old tracks

keep 'em coming

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18-08-2006 08:59 Homepage of cynik
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