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Diasporah 
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Registration Date: 04-08-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Diasporah - Luke ' and post your comments here!!!
Addl prod. by dj Press
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15-08-2006 03:00 |
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lokius
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Registration Date: 15-08-2006
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this is a hard one to review. there are alot of elements in the song... maybe work on the mix down part... bring some of those nice sounds forward more. Loving the break down/interlude, good atmosphere.. the drop confused me a bit...bass needs leveling, drums sound good, Nice ONe!!
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15-08-2006 17:28 |
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waxjunglist
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Registration Date: 19-06-2006
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its interesting. Kind of like dark in a haunted vampire" house-like
hosting to a bunch of zombies on x Looking for ravers to convert to their wicked ways.
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21-08-2006 05:25 |
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thechronic
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First of all, big up for the MP3 quality, makes it a lot easier to review!!
I think the intro is a bit weird. Strange choice of sounds, it sounds more like half a track than an intro. IMO the track could start better at 1:08.
Mixwise the snare sounds too loud to me. Also if I turn down the volume progressively I end up hearing only the snare.
I like that the snare is placed on the downbeat instead of the regular 2nd count, this gives an urgent and driving feel to the rhythm. The drum programming is nicely done, different than usual. The little percussion things fill it up well, hihats etc are well done.
There are some nasty things going on in the low end. In the beginning of the track the kick sounds nice and full, but one of the synth loops has a very dominating low frequency aspect in it that messes it up. Try putting high pass filters on stuff that does not really need much low end. Also filter out the low end of your reverbs, and avoid putting a lot of reverb on heavy sounds.
The master compression needs a lot of work, it is too heavily compressed and the attack and release are not right. This impacts the sound a lot, making it sound choppy and nervous (example: the cymbal at 0:44).
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25-08-2006 04:37 |
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Diaspora
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Registration Date: 08-11-2003
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Thanx for the review guys...
This tune is a cut that me and my homie started working on using original synthesis
every sound was created from scratch in reaktor and then sampled then dropped in for a quick track... Just to see if we could make our oinw sounds...
But really thanks for the feedback!!!
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11-10-2006 11:30 |
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Airfull
Sexy Lady
Registration Date: 09-11-2002
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I think u have some nice ideas but they don't come out.
you wanna use everything.
sometimes less is more!
how long have u been making tracks?
just to know...because if you just started it isn't bad.
it doesn't have a beginning and it doesn't have an end.
hmm..
idd hard on to review...
6/10
greets
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13-10-2006 11:37 |
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Nick ZZ
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Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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Sounds like you can use a little work on arangement.
Like the vocal
Drumz can use more EQ and layering on the drumz
One thing that might help would be to split the bass in half and eq the high and low seperatly so you can leave a little bit of room in the mid range for the drumz. Good luck to you. Cheers. Z
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13-10-2006 15:34 |
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BROKEMISSION
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Registration Date: 09-09-2007
Posts: 10
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FRESH SOUND VERY UNIQE...ORIGIANL SOUND...LOVE THE BASS LINE...MAD LOVE WE HAVE THE SAMPE FEELING FOR MUSIC...ALL IT NEEDS NOW IS ABOUT 20, 15 INCH SUBS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE JUNGLE....FOR ALL TO GO AROUND...ONLY THING I WOULD CRITIC IS THE DRUMLINE
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