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Philthy McNasty
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Please check out my new track '!@The Real Dark Side@!' and post your comments here!!!
This is the real deal on this tune. You will see how much I have improved!
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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14-08-2006 23:30 |
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camo
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intro drums are very interesting!....fx not too cool.......bass sounds weak.....1.40:.im asking myself: still intro?...........
ok...drop:very messy drums...bass again much too weak and boring melody...use the LFO and filter it to make it more interesting......ok.....overall not my taste.....but interesting drums for sure!!!!
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15-08-2006 12:45 |
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Sephiroth
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you got nice arrangement on the drums with the kind of stutter effect.
Bass is heavy, maybe a bit too heavy, drowns out other sounds a bit. Intro is too long, got a bit boring after a while, the effects aren't processed too well either and don't really fit with the rest of the track. Drums are ok really, they're mixed ok and sit pretty nicely within the mix. Its a bit too hectic for my taste, but a good effort none the less, keep at it!
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15-08-2006 14:37 |
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Paki
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ok.. so teh intro is tooooooooooo looooooooooonnngggg...
The drop... intersting drums u`ve put some effort here...
Bassline too heavy try to lover it... Dilinja doesnt uses loud basslines...
Try not to use the effects so "wet" .. use them as sends.. maybe it will sound ok...
Idea overall is good...
Just cut the intro...
Don`t try to achieve any style (dilinja,tech itch...or anyone) try to improvise if u can`t fit the style...
use more originality and individuality...
Listen what u mix,before to eq it or to release it...
A tip... after u have finished the track.. go to sleep and make the mastering and mixing the very next day... or even more after two or three days...
Effects don`t resolve the problem... use headphones if necessery to MIX!!!
MIXING is VERY important.. if u mix it well u use less eq and mastering effects on the general sound...
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16-08-2006 05:22 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Originally posted by Paki
ok.. so teh intro is tooooooooooo looooooooooonnngggg...
The drop... intersting drums u`ve put some effort here...
Bassline too heavy try to lover it... Dilinja doesnt uses loud basslines...
Try not to use the effects so "wet" .. use them as sends.. maybe it will sound ok...
Idea overall is good...
Just cut the intro...
Don`t try to achieve any style (dilinja,tech itch...or anyone) try to improvise if u can`t fit the style...
use more originality and individuality...
Listen what u mix,before to eq it or to release it...
A tip... after u have finished the track.. go to sleep and make the mastering and mixing the very next day... or even more after two or three days...
Effects don`t resolve the problem... use headphones if necessery to MIX!!!
MIXING is VERY important.. if u mix it well u use less eq and mastering effects on the general sound... |
First off, I got new speakers, and ditched my shit headphones. When I went back and listened to my tunes, I hear the muddiness of my basslines, that is the majority of my problems. I got the tutorials off of here for EQ and mastering so I am reading into it. And I am gonna work my ass off. Because I am beginning to have things click, with the means of laying down tracks. Now its the hard part of mastering and EQ'n them to show the full quality of my tunes. I have been hearing good things about the layouts just my mastering sucks! And now that I listened on a set of Surround Sound, I totally agree. So, no more tunes from me for awhile. I am gonna get this EQ/Master thing down if it kills me. And about the Dillinja bassline I just meant that nasty punch sound.
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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by Philthy McNasty: 16-08-2006 08:49.
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16-08-2006 08:46 |
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