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Please check out my new track 'GOKYO' and post your comments here!!!
This is a small clip of the track ive been workin on,..there's absolutly no structure yet,..or theme,..or eq,..just some idea's at the moment,... Would love to know what ya'll think,..so please feel free to slap some ideas down,..or let me know if you dig it,..feedback a very good thing,..and greatly appreciated,...cheers all.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by equipped: 14-08-2006 08:10.
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14-08-2006 08:09 |
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Paki
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the idea with the subbas is great but it`s too much...
Try to mix it well...
The drums are coming too much in the front and the bass almost kiled my ears...
The idea of the track is very ok:
If I don`t judge the tech aspects it is awesome tune... try to lower the bass line and the drums...
They are too agressive...
The vocals fit very well, short but power track
Yes the idea is very exelent ... LOVE IT!!!! rate this 10/10
Taking into acount the tech aspekts... rate this tune overall 7/10
Like the imporivisation not a specific style 
Looking forward to hear something new just keep improvizing 
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14-08-2006 12:23 |
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Paki
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yesss just a little better mixing would do the work...
everything is great the samples r very good incomponeted... the eq and the compression is good...
Just better mixing... try to use headphones instead of monitors(maybe you`ve had but something go wrong)
If u could hear ... the vocals r somehow too much in "mood" in the background...
it has the efect of the bienia...
lower the kiks maybe???
it is somehow too loud...
maybe without maximizer...
listen to the bassdrum and the bassline at the 2:00...
maybe if you move the bassline 1/16 note forward... not hit together with the basdrum would solve the problem???
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14-08-2006 12:30 |
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yeeeehaaaa ; new equipped tune 
been a while ey ?? 
intro sounds are cool ;
drop : fatass junglism ---> turn up the sub here but do re-eq it in the low end a bit
drumz:could stand out a bit more ; kick's a bit blurry
i'd try an put in a part where u bring in a ragga vocal (an maybe distorted 909's :devil
i think they would fit the tune well
nice production; lookin forward to the finished product 
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14-08-2006 13:15 |
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equipped
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fuck sake!,..this site's for shure crankin again,..massive review's
,..thank's Paki,..Baz,.. Fresh Kutt and Jimmy C,..you guy's be some solid poo's,..@Paki->Yeah it's a real mess at the moment,..the worst offender in the whole track is that sub,...still in the very early stage's,..but there's nothing more boring than equin a sub and even worse, midi mapping the notes 
,..ill do all that today,..but your right that sub need's massive work,..i wasn't shure what you meant bout the vocal's in second review?,..anyway thank's for the helpfull word's,..@Fresh Kutt->yeah man,.. true ruffness is hard to tame,..im lovin that it blare's a bit but your right,..will try n sort that,..anyway glad your diggin it,..will make intro much bigger,..tryin to get a spooky Tibetan theme goin with those horn's,..just whipped it up for now though,..@Dirty Baz's->Thank's man,..will forshure try those ideas,...and @ Jimmy C's->That main break is the "apache",..Fresh Kutt slapped er down allready,..i really hope this tunes a micheal winner man,..that would be the shit,..thank's for the review,...surprised no one asked what name Gokyo meant,..its a very special hill in Nepal...again thank's for all the feedback,..will finish this shit soon.
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14-08-2006 19:51 |
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Paki
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About the vocals...
What i ment about the vocals ... they r too much in the background or the other parts r too offencive Tongue I pointed them out just to give u direction on the bad mixing:-)
The midi notes... don`t change anytning .. just select them all in the sequencer u r working... quantize them to 1/16 and move them togetehe for 1/16 note forward.. the bass melody is ok... it is only one second of work:-)
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14-08-2006 20:11 |
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Holy shiz man. I am loving this tune. From start to finish or atleast half finished. The breakdown is a little weak but I am sure you will work on that. I especially love the bubbling bassline at 2 minutes, there should be more of that. You kind of have a LTJ style going to this tune. Much RespecT!
iKoN
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14-08-2006 20:18 |
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equipped
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Originally posted by Paki
The midi notes... don`t change anytning .. just select them all in the sequencer u r working... quantize them to 1/16 and move them togetehe for 1/16 note forward.. the bass melody is ok... it is only one second of work:-) |
i was only joking,..ive know what you mean,..but the bass line is off in different part's,..im very unorganized,..ill have to work a solid midi version and then ill forshure try what your sayin,..that actually help's allot,..ive been usin that technique for a while but wasn't shure if it was just bad habbit's,..i can tell you know your shit,..so i know now it's a good technique and not some bad habbit of mine...thank's for that.
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14-08-2006 20:55 |
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Originally posted by iKoN
Holy shiz man. I am loving this tune. From start to finish or atleast half finished. The breakdown is a little weak but I am sure you will work on that. I especially love the bubbling bassline at 2 minutes, there should be more of that. You kind of have a LTJ style going to this tune. Much RespecT!
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thats the second time i got an LTJ comment,..thank's allot for that,... gonna have to check his tunes now,..glad your diggin the tune,.will make more of the Bubbling bass line
.cheers on the review.
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14-08-2006 20:58 |
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Sephiroth
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The mix sounds a bit muddy in the bass areas in particular. Could do with cutting sounds at really low frequencies, the kick drum for example, this might help make the lower end of the mix sound a bit cleaner. the arrangement is good tho, the drums variations and drops are quite nice. i like the sample too, sounds real atmospheric and fits the tune well. Good Stuff.
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14-08-2006 21:36 |
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Originally posted by equipped
.surprised no one asked what name Gokyo meant,.. |
i thought u was drunk an mistyped tokyo
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15-08-2006 00:19 |
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yeah it does need a bit of a clean up...
but still its a sik track.
love the sound fx and synths and bass. the drums are heaps cool.
the arrangment is very cool and interesting... the automating stuff on the basslines is awesome.
nice use of effects.
finish this one man... tis sounding good.
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15-08-2006 09:30 |
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stickbubbly
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nutty with the sound effex, nice work.
you pay alot of attention to backround fx. it adds alot of dimension.
cool shuffling drums. sound like an old school kit. not my thing but fits well into the song.
bass is really deep. maybe a bit too punchy.
really like the melody.
look forward to hearing the finished product.
cheers.
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