drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » iKoN - Jungle is My Destiny-Remastered!!!! iKoN - Jungle is My Destiny-Remastered!!!! Author Post Philthy McNasty Florida DnB Masta! Registration Date: 23-07-2006 Posts: 1,088 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Jungle is My Destiny-Remastered!!!!' and post your comments here!!! Hopefully this is it This track has been deleted on the producer's request __ http://www.myspace.com/philthydubbish 11-08-2006 19:17 baz 7 Registration Date: 19-02-2005 Posts: 1,531 Helpfulness rating:  i'll give this a late nite review when i get back home __ "shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw" 11-08-2006 19:46 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Ough, this track has like the ultimate anti-drop! Once the track drops, it looses all power it had. No punch, no drive... The vocal is kinda cool though... __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 12-08-2006 20:01 Philthy McNasty Florida DnB Masta! Registration Date: 23-07-2006 Posts: 1,088 Helpfulness rating:  Ouch....that hurts.......what do you think it needs???? I am thinking of losing the beginning vocal and keeping the one when it drops.....I will keep the chopped up vocal but lose the first synth.....god i am confused with this forum......everyone has different opinions about this track! __ http://www.myspace.com/philthydubbish 12-08-2006 22:58 exhumed Producer Registration Date: 08-02-2006 Posts: 32 Helpfulness rating:  startin out with a lil touch of that nice epic sound (i love epic). here comes the build up and a break. nice end break too. the voice is too loud. you definately need to make the track more bassy. need some work on your transitions. still likeing the breaks. it seems your not done with the track (asuming this because of the cut out at the end). overall the track need more bass better transitions and more variations. i like the feel you had at the begining. work on this track some more it has some good potential. not bad, not bad at all. keep at it __ Long Beach City Drum N Bass {(( LBC DNB ))} motha fuckin' get some! www.myspace.com/djcasket 13-08-2006 05:51 FRESH KUTT Producer Registration Date: 01-02-2006 Posts: 25 right im listening to it now ........ intro is pure wickedness, love the atmospheric synth voices !!! hold on its just droped ....... and ...... hhhhmmmmm not my thing, as for production it seems that when the second break comes in after the normal amen, it comes in way tooo loud !!!! its a bit on the dark side for my likeing but i love the intro !!!!! peace love and heavy b-lines from FRESH KUTT __ THE TRICK OF TECHNOLOGY IS ........ its not what you got, its how you use it !!!!!! http://www.myspace.com/prisonersoftechnology 14-08-2006 16:32 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by iKoN everyone has different opinions about this track! Yes, but I'm always right, hehe I think there's something seriously wrong with your mastering, but your drums also need some layering, to beef them up... __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 15-08-2006 12:05 Philthy McNasty Florida DnB Masta! Registration Date: 23-07-2006 Posts: 1,088 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Surya quote: Originally posted by iKoN everyone has different opinions about this track! Yes, but I'm always right, hehe I think there's something seriously wrong with your mastering, but your drums also need some layering, to beef them up... I have only been producing for 3 weeks now.....so thats what wrong with my mastering __ http://www.myspace.com/philthydubbish 15-08-2006 16:29 Philthy McNasty Florida DnB Masta! Registration Date: 23-07-2006 Posts: 1,088 Helpfulness rating:  Now that I have kind of learned how to use my VSTs better I am gonna redo this tune again. I wonder how many times people redo tunes before them, and others are happy with it. I dunno thanks for the reviews though guys! __ http://www.myspace.com/philthydubbish 15-08-2006 17:12 lokius Producer Registration Date: 15-08-2006 Posts: 61 Helpfulness rating:  Great atmosphere with the epicness and voices... original sparse breaks which i like... i like the kick drum build up.. the drop is disappointing,, i can hardly hear the bass.. the beats in the intro were better.. maybe layer and build up those? needs some melody/hook or some nice synths... some more variation on the beats would have been nice... quite a long intro.... after hearing the intro for 2mins i was expecting a better drop....................... 15-08-2006 22:46 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by iKoN I have only been producing for 3 weeks now..... Oh, OK then You're doing fine then Just make a ton of new tracks. And then another ton of new tracks. You'll start getting the hang of it __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 16-08-2006 09:57 Philthy McNasty Florida DnB Masta! Registration Date: 23-07-2006 Posts: 1,088 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Surya quote: Originally posted by iKoN I have only been producing for 3 weeks now..... Oh, OK then You're doing fine then Just make a ton of new tracks. And then another ton of new tracks. You'll start getting the hang of it Are my ideas atleast good, cause the way that sounds. Your kind of saying they arent good, and I need to make different ones. Or are you saying I should learn how to master and EQ on the ones I have done?? I'm confused __ http://www.myspace.com/philthydubbish 16-08-2006 10:02 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  No, I'm saying that they're not really good and that you should focus on making as many new tracks as you can. That's the best way to learn what works and what doesn't and how to achieve certain effects... EQing and stuff is something you learn along the way. What is really important is that you learn to hear what you made, not what you wanted to make. When you start making music, those two tend to end up being quite different. A good way to do this (both for sound/structure and soundquality) is by comparing your track to released tracks you think sound good and are a similar style. Only then will the parts that need work become really clear... __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 16-08-2006 10:52 thechronic admin Registration Date: 01-11-2002 Posts: 5,293 Helpfulness rating:  Composition wise it's a nice track I think. Nice ideas! __ If you find spam on the site, please hit the button and select my name. I'll personally kick it to the murky depths of hell where it belongs! 17-08-2006 20:57 Muad'Dib Andrejnalin Registration Date: 02-12-2003 Posts: 4,197 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Surya Ough, this track has like the ultimate anti-drop! Once the track drops, it looses all power it had. No punch, no drive... The vocal is kinda cool though... Hahah, nice phrase... and true. __ Thinking about becoming an Image-Line/FL Studio customer? Want a 10% reduction in price? Use this affiliate link: http://affiliate.image-line.com/BADEBDG473 There is no such thing without its opposite -Bene Gesserit 18-08-2006 01:04 Philthy McNasty Florida DnB Masta! Registration Date: 23-07-2006 Posts: 1,088 Helpfulness rating:  Can you explain what you mean by the anti-drop. Does the buildup of the song make you think its gonna be something different or what are you talking about? Maud when i redo this song i am takin ur vocals out Just kidding they fit perfect __ http://www.myspace.com/philthydubbish 18-08-2006 02:06 Muad'Dib Andrejnalin Registration Date: 02-12-2003 Posts: 4,197 Helpfulness rating:  I think I know what Surya ment (and what I mean too): when the break starts after the drop, it is very weak - no change in dynamics, no change in loudness or agressiveness - which makes no drop at all. And for that the drop takes full responsibility. Try lowering the volumes there and increase them little by little before the drop. IF that helps anything... PS If you take my vocals out I'll take your head off. and I am not kidding that I am kidding about this one. __ Thinking about becoming an Image-Line/FL Studio customer? Want a 10% reduction in price? Use this affiliate link: http://affiliate.image-line.com/BADEBDG473 There is no such thing without its opposite -Bene Gesserit 18-08-2006 02:29 Philthy McNasty Florida DnB Masta! Registration Date: 23-07-2006 Posts: 1,088 Helpfulness rating:  I get it the build up should have started off loud, then lowered then I should have dropped a serious bass drop then that would have made it better. And actually the more I listen the more I am thinking the amen doesnt fit in the song. But your vocals have been deleted just for your smart assness __ http://www.myspace.com/philthydubbish 18-08-2006 03:58 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  The amens would be fine if you didn't use them as is. Layer a ton of other drums over them to give them more punch and drive, a bigger range in the spectrum... __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 18-08-2006 09:50 D Juice Producer Registration Date: 15-08-2006 Posts: 59 Helpfulness rating:  its just that the first drop is really really way too softie compared to the antro, and the second breakdown with that kinda hiphop is also again way too hard, but nevermind, its a really cool track keep up the good work __ "Could God microwave a Burrito so hot, that he himself could not eat it? " 18-08-2006 11:18 Pages (2): [1] 2 next » drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » iKoN - Jungle is My Destiny-Remastered!!!!