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lead:end 
straight up beastin'
Registration Date: 10-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Lead::end' and post your comments here!!!
welle yeah, haven't got much experience so it won't be much, only have fl for like 3 or 4 days.
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11-08-2006 13:05 |
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Paki
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Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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The lead lack of atmos... Bassline is very good.... Try to use more harsh snares... Like the bassline it floods... Has a lot of dynamics... maybe you could try to distort the vocals...
The drop is very short... It is the same as the first drop...
Yes the track is very ok, can`t complain about the sound quality..
Like it...
I rate this tube 7.5/10
Keep it up
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11-08-2006 17:10 |
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Rudeone
love & light
Registration Date: 15-10-2005
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intro sounds kinda random sample collection. beat needs more punch. dont like that much stereo panning with those sounds. some nice ideas here.
very good for that short time. keep at it!
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11-08-2006 17:22 |
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lead:end
straight up beastin'
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thanx i'll keep it all in mind, allready working on an other song with more care.. the other was... just a test people.. thanx anyway!
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11-08-2006 20:06 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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The opening has alot going on you should really break it down into sections. The basic kick is a little lame. I like the synths at the beginning. It kind of sounds like you are making a techno break beat at first. Then you kind of go into the realm of DnB. But then you go back into the whole break beat thing. I think that your style is more along the lines of break beats not DnB. The basic kick snare kick snare isnt drum and bass to me. It has to be more complex than that. I dig the synths though. The repetitive bassline is boring and the samples do not go with the song they just come out of nowhere. Im being honest, I dont know if you wanted me to sugarcoat 
or come straight from the heart. But think of changing this songs genre into breakbeats and slow it down a bit and then you might have something! Just my thoughts!
RespecT!
iKoN
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12-08-2006 00:57 |
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lead:end
straight up beastin'
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well... speaking my mind... not going to happen!
lol no, i've been a dnb maniac for years now... it's just a test! lol and give me a way to get more punch in that kick... i want to i'm just a noob trying to figure things out lol.. and criticism only fuels my fire to make better dnb.. so say what u think and i'll be thankfull..
cheers
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12-08-2006 02:04 |
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equipped
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yeah the buildup/intro was a bit messy but when you get thing's rollin it sound's good man,.fuckin groovin,.. 
,...allot of your one hit's would sound better if more proccessed,..bounce em with load's of effect's,..try n get em less clean soundin,...you also could just look for different samples,..but you might like what your usin for hit's,.. so this is all imo,..but thought id slap the ideas down anyway,..hope this shit's helpfull,..cheers lead:end.
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12-08-2006 07:05 |
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benji b
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Registration Date: 27-06-2006
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you got a good tune there mate. but yeah you defo need to beef up that snare. i reckon its gotta be proper mean for that track.
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12-08-2006 14:28 |
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Nick ZZ
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Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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-Wierd intro
-That snare in the intro could use a layer and compression
-Drumz can use some layers and compression
-Kick can use a little beef, can barely hear it
-The bass is kind smothering, try to EQ it a bit more
-The ending can use a little work
6/10* Z
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12-08-2006 18:03 |
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crolerbedo
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Registration Date: 18-08-2006
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nice sample too, i know what it is to show your begininng tracks, same for me but it's the best to improve, and it's really good in 3 or 4 days (couldn't have done something like this)
funny thing : i used the same sound in my first track, the little "woozim" sound-like....haha uninteresting but i wanted to say it
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18-08-2006 18:30 |
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BROKEMISSION
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Registration Date: 09-09-2007
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FEELIN THE INTRO...TIGHT DROP...SIK BASSLINE...VERY EVIL....LIKE THE VOCAL SAMP ALSO...UR IN MY LEVEL...WOULDNT HATE TO HEAR IT A LITTLE FASTER THOUGH..WITH THE CHANGE UPS...DEFINITE REWIND...
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