Paki
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Please check out my new track 'Darkside Ryders' and post your comments here!!!
Its combination of Hard and Darkstep ... I think...
This track has been deleted. Reason: Paki has been banned from the site for creating a second identity and trying to cheat the voting system.
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11-08-2006 05:13 |
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anf0 D
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intro with the drums n effects is cool.
then drops into the full force drums n reece pretty quickly.
the sound fx are really cool, like them.
the drums could probably do with a few layers.
i think that there needs to be some huge sub underneath that reece
the riff is pretty cool and the drums edits are nice.
maybe after second break you could introduce a more complex riff,
i sort of found my self skipping through the end of the track.
not bad but i think it still needs some work on the drums n bass.
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11-08-2006 07:50 |
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ESP-DNB
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Hi, liked the track at a basic level, few areas need addressing tho.
I agree, it needs a lot more low end on the reece. maybe tuck a sub underneath or maybe see what u can get by messing around with the EQ. The bleepy sound fx is reallly cool, could maybe accent it a little more by removing kicks or something when the sound plays. I also feel it lacks a bit of direction, definitely needs some form of variation on the 2nd part really. The drums are nice altho could do with some tidying up on the eq front. Maybe you could play around with some filters or LFO on the reece.
All in all a good effort but still sounds very much a work in progress and 2nd drop needs some variant to stop it getting tired.
Peace
ESP
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11-08-2006 09:08 |
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Paki
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Yeah I agree wwith you pepole... It sounds kinda dull... I`ll try to vary it a little bit , but the general idea with the bassline was to "drive" not be very chaotic and provoctive. Don`t u think?
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11-08-2006 17:03 |
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Rudeone
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the filterd beat doesnt sound clean. when it drops it needs some eqin. beat more up front and less hi-end i think. nice switches and good groove on the bass. bass needs more lo-end imo. only headphones here. some more modulation would be good to. tune is also a bit emtpy.
nice one so far, but needs some fills and more work.
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11-08-2006 17:29 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Ouch the snares at the beginning hurt my ears. You should lower them slightly. Then the tune starts off good. The breakdown comes alittle to soon for my taste. Then you drop into just the amen and synths, kind of confused me a little. But when you actually get into it, it sounds ill as hell. You could lose the creepy laugh and the uh and come up with something else. Also, when fucking with amens they need to be juggled around alot more. they are kind of repetitive. I dig the amen temp changes though but reverse the snare at the end of the amen break ever once in a while and then you have a decent chopped up amen. All in all Breaks = decent, Synths = awesome, vocal samples = OK kind of weird. But at the end, I hope your working on an ending cause I have learned from all producers on this and other forums that you definetly shouldnt end like that. All in all......keep it up you have some good tunage there!
RespecT!
iKoN
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12-08-2006 01:04 |
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equipped
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1:47 laugh is killer,.this shit's full on,..got a good drive to it,..that fucking laugh's funny as shit,..work's so dam good over your mad break mashin,..the level's and some eq need work but diggin the ideas ya'll got,..diggin it,..cheers.
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12-08-2006 07:13 |
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OgO
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Hey... the track's going very well... the eq is is littlebit propper not so well you have to boost it around 560hz it will jam (only for bass). Vocals uhhh.. fuck...very good espetially that one "uhh". the bassline is going well... very dnbassy... as everybody says only the rithmics are a bit boring when coming into second...third or so drop... i really think that you should change the dynamics of the rithm to be more alive.
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14-08-2006 00:06 |
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XTensionTrigger
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Yep that 100% my style/direction, the drums need work and track not have end/outro but reese/synth basses sounds good, damn all is very similar to old Surya's track's
, anyway bigup bro...
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14-08-2006 13:24 |
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Philthy McNasty
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14-08-2006 14:33 |
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Paki
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iKoN
Im retarded, I already reviewed this one Pleased
Review it again
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14-08-2006 19:13 |
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Paki
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Originally posted by iKoN
Im retarded, I already reviewed this one
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It wont harm anything...
Anyway thanks man
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14-08-2006 19:14 |
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Philthy McNasty
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14-08-2006 19:25 |
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Paki
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Originally posted by iKoN
Damn how come my helpfulness rating is dropping like crazy I have reviewed every song and have given my opinion. Geeeezzzz this sux |
It isn`t just a matter of reviewing but if ur review is helpfull...
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14-08-2006 19:58 |
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