drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » iKoN - "Jungle is my Destiny" iKoN - "Jungle is my Destiny" Author Post Philthy McNasty Florida DnB Masta! Registration Date: 23-07-2006 Posts: 1,088 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track '"Jungle is my Destiny"' and post your comments here!!! Formally Can I get an Amen but finished this time This track has been deleted on the producer's request __ http://www.myspace.com/philthydubbish 11-08-2006 00:23 Muad'Dib Andrejnalin Registration Date: 02-12-2003 Posts: 4,197 Helpfulness rating:  Nice intro strings,, and those voices... me likes them alot. Especially the one that goes stereo (left-right). Wow, nice break, ya have one sliding element in it that brings a little freshness. Thnx. The kick is little weak now but maybe you'll fix that. I like the way how you play with those voices (the cut and play). Ok, first minute is out and no aggressiveness... Drop at 01:27. This might be good. The sound quality is good. The voices in background are to loud. Ok, here is the build up. Way too short. Try adding a synth or two more. The rhytm after the build up is way too weak. That background synth is too loud compared to the synth. Wow 02:30 great combo of drumz. Me likes them. But still not loud enough. The snare has too much presence, and not enough power. Try adding another snare. The kick is still weak. Ok, so you introduce those voices again (as cut n play). Your background sounds are too loud. That covers the snare and the drumz. The end comes little unimaginative. Try adding some other delayed/reverbed synths of drums to fix that. Good, but needs work. 6/10 __ Thinking about becoming an Image-Line/FL Studio customer? Want a 10% reduction in price? Use this affiliate link: http://affiliate.image-line.com/BADEBDG473 There is no such thing without its opposite -Bene Gesserit 11-08-2006 14:40 Philthy McNasty Florida DnB Masta! Registration Date: 23-07-2006 Posts: 1,088 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Muad'Dib Nice intro strings,, and those voices... me likes them alot. Especially the one that goes stereo (left-right). Wow, nice break, ya have one sliding element in it that brings a little freshness. Thnx. The kick is little weak now but maybe you'll fix that. I like the way how you play with those voices (the cut and play). Ok, first minute is out and no aggressiveness... Drop at 01:27. This might be good. The sound quality is good. The voices in background are to loud. Ok, here is the build up. Way too short. Try adding a synth or two more. The rhytm after the build up is way too weak. That background synth is too loud compared to the synth. Wow 02:30 great combo of drumz. Me likes them. But still not loud enough. The snare has too much presence, and not enough power. Try adding another snare. The kick is still weak. Ok, so you introduce those voices again (as cut n play). Your background sounds are too loud. That covers the snare and the drumz. The end comes little unimaginative. Try adding some other delayed/reverbed synths of drums to fix that. Good, but needs work. 6/10 OK I have posted this on 3 forums and everyone has said almost the same thing, soooooo I spent all morning remastering.....AGAIN! and I am impressed with how it came out. I am reposting the remasterd version please take a listen and see if that was what you were getting at! Thanks for the feddback everyone!~ RespecT! iKoN __ http://www.myspace.com/philthydubbish 11-08-2006 19:05 tryptech Tryptech Registration Date: 16-08-2006 Posts: 853 Helpfulness rating:  Nice track, nice intro, it's simple and that makes it special. I like this track very much, I downloaded it to my playlist. Well done, It's chill tot listen to this. ScaranjaPS Perfect break certainly in combination with the voice ' Its your destiny' __ ANALOGUE (Tryptech) 16-08-2006 19:14 D Juice Producer Registration Date: 15-08-2006 Posts: 59 Helpfulness rating:  Ok nou, om te beginnen vind ik het melodietje en sound in je intro heel tof, het melodietje in het stuk na je eerste breakdown echter, het krachtige stuk zegmaar, is erg langdradig en zal daardoor niet echt catchy zijn. ook zou ik een nog effe een compressor over de 2 sampletjes heen gooien die je hebt gebruikt, en boven dien geeft als je reason 3.0 gebruikt een scream 4 distortion een heel vet effect als je hem op overdrive zet en dan de damage een stuk naar beneden trekt, bovendien al je middentonen eruit trekken bij 'cut' op je scream 4 ook zou ik zeker nog wat tweak en tune werk verrichten aan al je drum sampletjes. iets wat ik heel irritant vond in dit nummer was de overswitch van intro naar beukend. die drums zijn cool maar ze zijn te hard, daardoor beukt je stuk dat er dan inkomt veel minder , dat is zonde. dit komt ook wel een beetje doordat je sample te hard is [compressor eroverheen zoals ik al eerder zei. Keep up the work, laat de tips tot je doordringen en veel oefenen, dan komt het vanzelf. Succes! __ "Could God microwave a Burrito so hot, that he himself could not eat it? " 18-08-2006 10:49 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Please post in English, most of our visitors don't speak Dutch! __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 18-08-2006 11:03 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » iKoN - "Jungle is my Destiny"