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Philthy McNasty 
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10-08-2006 09:03 |
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BeatJunkie
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Listening now.... that piano or whatever in the intro, is familiar. From some movie innit? The intro is dark, but almost cheesy imo. No offense intended of course. The 'old school' drums don't seem to fit with the dark, scary intro imo.
..k, it drops again @ 2:40. I like those drums better, but theres something with the sub bass. too distorted? or something.
all in all, i like the drums, especially the 2nd drops. some edits goin on, but I think you need sumthin to pull it all together, maybe some type of melody. keep at it... not bad at all.
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10-08-2006 13:53 |
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lead:end
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the intro is from halloween... i think... think the snare is to loud... it gets all crunchy and stuff...concept is cool. but no offence i don't feel it... liked the intro of can i get an amen more. now after the drop it gets beter, but i recon thatnow the subbas is a bit to loud, can hardly hear the drums. little more twisting all those buttons i think.
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10-08-2006 14:25 |
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Philthy McNasty
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It is just a layout. I was just feeling that kind of eeeerie vibe last nite. I am definetly keeping the ending, and I am gonna change the intro a bit. Can anyone tell me what kind of break should be at the begining?? Something dark and easy (2step style), and crunchy and dark??
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10-08-2006 14:53 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Originally posted by lead:end
the intro is from halloween... i think... think the snare is to loud... it gets all crunchy and stuff...concept is cool. but no offence i don't feel it... liked the intro of can i get an amen more. now after the drop it gets beter, but i recon thatnow the subbas is a bit to loud, can hardly hear the drums. little more twisting all those buttons i think.
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And the intro is from "The Exorcist"
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10-08-2006 14:56 |
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haha the good old exorcist samples 
once again ; the tune has potential but seriously lacks speed ;
the kick in the first part of the track is waaaay to overpowering turn it down or re-eq it a bit.
02:40 you will die!!! classic vox
aight so this is where it get interesting ; i can hear where ur goin with ur tune but first of all distort that bass more ; then eq it for it's pushed back in the track (same with the break here)
what software u on ; i might wanna help u gettin it to sound better
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10-08-2006 16:10 |
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Philthy McNasty
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But the bassline and the sliced up amen at the end are sick as hell......nooo??? Also, keep in mind I have only 2 weeks of producing under my belt. I thought it out, and I am gonna lose the exorcist theme and come up with a different eerie pad. I am also gonna lose alot of those creepy sounds. I will repost when I am all finished!
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10-08-2006 18:33 |
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BeatJunkie
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yeh man you got some good ideas, and thats not bad at all if youve only been at it a couple weeks. but I just think the intro and the main part of the tune dont go together, the intro=dark..... main=old skool beats. but its a good start/.
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10-08-2006 19:54 |
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lead:end
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ok complete review.. intro...the kick is way to loud in my opinion.. i would turn it a little.. kay now the drop... ok unexpected change... again the kick.. laughing vocal is freaky... but cool...there's a kind of bassy string in the backround... sounds like the intro of summer overture... welle yeah..shadows from unknown error... bring it up more... cool sound.. fill it up with some bass or a synth is kindof... empty imo.oooooh spooky vocal!^^ second drop aproaching...THERE the sound right before the second drop... bring it up!.. here's some bass.. bass sounds quite simple... not really an outro..., like that can i get an amen song... put it in the garage and tune it a lil'..
.peace
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10-08-2006 22:16 |
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