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Philthy McNasty 
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The track definetly has some potential. But you need to EQ the hell out of that tune. The begining is so distored I cant even comprehend whats going on. The break is to dirty, the samples need to be enhansed and cleaned up. I know you were going for that dirty-grimey style, but you went way into the relm of nasty. The laughing sample needs to go, and I am not much for the uh sample needs. The break at about a minute into it needs to be chopped up a little. The breaks are so distored I cant even hear the bass at all. Also, the repetiveness of the tune is annoying. You need to change it up alot. The basis of the tune is OK, but you have no ending, and your all over the place. Rework the tune for another couple of days, and repost it. I hope you didnt want me to sugarcoat it, cause I am kind of a straight forward kind of guy 
I am just trying to help
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09-08-2006 06:06 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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thanks, don't want it sugarcoated, just want whatever you think. 
i agree that the main break is too distorted, I kinda went apeshit with with the camelcrusher on a few layers of the break. It's a rough draft, just wanted input. I appreciate your candor.
Thanks for the comments.
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09-08-2006 06:19 |
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yeah that's perty dam painfull,..loose that distortion,..or least most of it,...you can easily get that hard edged sound without goin so crazy on the dist levels,,...sound's like you were expeiramenting and that's a good thing 
,..at some part's you did a dam good job with all your mashing,..got some real sick sound's goin,..but the angry dist just takes away from whatever sound's good imo,..that little kid laugh was the shit,<me diggin that,..and all the sick sound's ya pulled off,...the "huh" vocal is used way to dam much by people imo,..but imo is imo so no worries,.anyway hope this was helpfull,..look foward to hearin some more tunes Hardplnsdrftr,...cheers. 
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09-08-2006 07:33 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Originally posted by equipped
yeah that's perty dam painfull,..loose that distortion,..or least most of it,...you can easily get that hard edged sound without goin so crazy on the dist levels,,...sound's like you were expeiramenting and that's a good thing
,..at some part's you did a dam good job with all your mashing,..got some real sick sound's goin,..but the angry dist just takes away from whatever sound's good imo,..that little kid laugh was the shit,<me diggin that,..and all the sick sound's ya pulled off,...the "huh" vocal is used way to dam much by people imo,..but imo is imo so no worries,.anyway hope this was helpfull,..look foward to hearin some more tunes Hardplnsdrftr,...cheers.
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Thanks for the comments...
I went a little crazy trying to over distort it to get a truly insane sound, I'll rework it and repost in a few days.
I am kinda addicted to the HUH, I'll have to work my way through it, it would be painful to go cold turkey.
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10-08-2006 00:56 |
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). I would appreciate some feedback.