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06-08-2006 20:09 |
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08-08-2006 13:51 |
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Rudeone
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its your tune. you should know if you like what you did?
nice pad in the intro. vocal is a bit harsh. not much goin on in the intro though. hardly can hear some bass on my headphones so the mainpart is pretty boring with just an amen. its nice but you need to come up with more
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08-08-2006 15:54 |
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keep messin round with ur sofware ; u got some potential but don't put enough time in ur ideas ; i can hear where this tune is going ; but it deff won't get ther without a decent lead or sub 
keep at it 
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08-08-2006 19:15 |
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diggin the heavy sound on the break's,...solid beat,..second beat goes off a bit,..some more edit's n lyers on drums would be all good,..loads of good ideas but as said before you need to give em more time,..cheers.
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08-08-2006 19:31 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Thanks for the feedback guys! I have been DJ'n for almost 4yrs, but producing for only like 2 weeks. It is a hell of a differnce! I thought that I could just jump in with my musical background and tear shit up.....but WOW i was way wrong. Is there anything that you could recommend that I could put in there to extend time, and blend it together better?
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08-08-2006 19:32 |
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the "more time" comment was bout you giving your idea's more time to grow,...let the tune sit for a bit, like a day or two and then have a listen,..usually fresh idea's will pop up cause your ears are fresh again,..sorry for confusion and hope this help's,.. cheers.
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08-08-2006 19:42 |
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BattleDrone
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Don't drop it, it's too good for that.
Add some action to the intro
In the intro there's a ghost hit with panning completely to the left, not diggin that.
the main part of the tune comes too late, there's no real build up or anything and the intro lasts for 1.50" that's way too long to keep it all interesting.
In the final build-up from the intro to the main part you play the vocal on different notes (stutter going up); not diggin' that either. Try something else with it.
In the "action part" the bassdrum has too much bass on it.
This tune has good fundaments, no continue to build it. 
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08-08-2006 23:36 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
Don't drop it, it's too good for that.
Add some action to the intro
In the intro there's a ghost hit with panning completely to the left, not diggin that.
the main part of the tune comes too late, there's no real build up or anything and the intro lasts for 1.50" that's way too long to keep it all interesting.
In the final build-up from the intro to the main part you play the vocal on different notes (stutter going up); not diggin' that either. Try something else with it.
In the "action part" the bassdrum has too much bass on it.
This tune has good fundaments, no continue to build it.
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When the amen hits....all the bass that follows the kicks was on purpose, I wanted it to quad out. I tried lowering the volume of the sub so it doesnt drown it out totally. The ghost voice pans to the left??? I centered it, so I dont understand why that is doing it, I'll check into it. Should I just let the kicks leading up to the amen be the set up, and just drop the stuttering voice or try out something different, maybe something with reversing the ghost voice and morphing it some? I agree with you that the intro is to long, but if you listen closely there is alot in the build up, I have the break, congo hits, and and a morphed out hi hat. I am new to producing and I thought the tune needed to be long, atleast 4 min. like most tunes, some are longer. If anyone has any idea to help me with the tune it would be much appreciated! But I just want to thank everyone for the feedback, it is helping me progress into possibly a good producer. Much Respect!
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09-08-2006 00:59 |
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BattleDrone
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Just try some things and see what fits you best... Hard to give you advice on what exactly you should do with the track just like that (besides the fact that such things are hard to explain).
I think you should add some less suttle action to the intro if you want to keep it long (but you should really make it shorter). It's not entertaining enough to keep your audience focused.
I don't think it's a good idea to play with panning in an extreme way and definatly not on elements that are in a loop (like drums).
You should EQ the bass which is so dominant when the amen kicks in, it is taking quite a bit out of the spectrum. It sounds like it's not intended to be like this.
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09-08-2006 01:30 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Right on, I will sit on it for a few days, and see if I get any ideas. What is the proper length for a tune of this sort though? I am not exactly sure. I have many tunes on vinyl that are way to long, but none that are less than 3 min, and I think this one is just at 3 min.
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