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koneone koneone is a male
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so, here´s a new track.

crossing the line mp3

what do you think about it?

greetz
koneone

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by koneone: 06-08-2006 21:08.
06-08-2006 19:24 Homepage of koneone
D2o D2o is a male
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man i hate that site is there any other way i can listen to it? Big Grin

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06-08-2006 22:39 Homepage of D2o
koneone koneone is a male
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Big Grin i don´t know, can you tell me a site where i can upload tracks in a simple way?

you can also check www.myspace.com/koneone24

sry for bad englisch ^^

greetz

aaaarrrrrrgh my profile (myspace) isn´t updated...hmm..the newest track (crossing the line) is missing.

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06-08-2006 22:53 Homepage of koneone
hardplnsdrftr hardplnsdrftr is a male
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I like a lot of your edits, but I think your drums could be a lot punchier if you add some layers to your bass drum and snare.

I also like the song structure, it really works for me. The ending is sort of weird.. it just sort of stops. This could work, but I don't think it is working the way you have it right now.

That pad that starts in at the beginning seems a little too loud for me.

Your song is seriously lacking any low end. Your bass needs to be a lot stronger, it is very weak, it lacks presence. I think the bass sound you are using could work, but it will need a lot of reinforcement via EQ, distortion, or addition of other bass sounds.

Overall it's a really good starting point... keep at it!

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07-08-2006 07:39 Homepage of hardplnsdrftr
koneone koneone is a male
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new version of "crossing the line".
please listen to my myspace profile and tell me what you think about it Smile

thanks
kne1

koneone @ myspace

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08-08-2006 17:46 Homepage of koneone
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