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Bulls-I
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06-08-2006 19:07 |
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ur tunes are startin to get somewhere man
first of i'd say u need to turn up the vocal in the intro
then try boosting ur drumz a bit ; i can hardly hear a kick in ur tune
maybe try gettin some more variating drumeditz here an there aswell
sampling is done properly except for the last one (let the beat..) shoud stop when when the drumz drop again
real great progress on the tunes !!
maybe rework some structure an layer those kicks;
keep at it
__ "shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw"
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06-08-2006 22:01 |
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D2o
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06-08-2006 22:38 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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That intro has some intersting thing going on. I have to agree with what has been said about the vocal in the intro.. way too quiet. Missed it actually on the 1st listen
I think your drum hits, for a song like yours, need to be real clean and hit real hard. I would add some layers to both your bass drum and your snare. Find a big thick bass drum (perhaps from funky mule?) to give it a bit more punch.
The ending doesn't work for me, I think you can eliminate elements over a greater period of time, then add the vocal sample and have it end at a more gradual pace.
__ "Trouble is the common denominator of living. It is the great equalizer."
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07-08-2006 07:50 |
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Bulls-I
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Thank you all for the commentaries, I'll hit you with the next one soon
Grtz
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07-08-2006 11:14 |
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Greyone
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Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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yo
Izegems talent
anyway:
intro is cool with the vocals , cool effects and verry cool bassline coming in. Alldough i expected some more things going on in the intro (intro drums + building up instead of the drop at 0:47) .
very good point is your EQing and the feeling of the music.
2nd drop is a bit too similar with the first one but its ok.
Nice n hard bassline , i like that a lot , allso try to bend the bass once in a while (with that blend tool 'triangle' in piano roll )
Your minor point is the structure of the track , it stops to abrupt at the breaks and the buildups arent that intensive .
But for the rest you're on the right way , keep producing and i'd like to make a track togheter with you (collab or remix)
greetz
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08-08-2006 13:22 |
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anf0 D
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yeah this has a mad trippy vibe.
the vocals and the intro are cool.
sampling from the dvd? good job.
basslines are phat, drums are eq'd nicely.
nice synths and sound fx used
arrangment seems good, although you could probably
have a beat doin something for a bit in the intro, to give it some
time to mix it in before the drop, if one was to mix it...
and its abit of a short tune, but other then that
its pretty cool
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09-08-2006 02:34 |
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